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Subject: RE: [ws-sx] Issue 83: Remove shading from figures
While I agree this issue is editorial, I don't see any shading in the figure at line 2630 and the shading in the figure at line 2914 indicates items that are encrypted. Same for the diagram at 3064. Gudge > -----Original Message----- > From: Marc Goodner [mailto:mgoodner@microsoft.com] > Sent: 10 July 2006 16:53 > To: Frederick Hirsch; ws-sx@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: [ws-sx] Issue 83: Remove shading from figures > > Issue 83 > > -----Original Message----- > From: Frederick Hirsch [mailto:frederick.hirsch@nokia.com] > Sent: Friday, July 07, 2006 10:17 AM > To: ws-sx@lists.oasis-open.org > Cc: Hirsch Frederick; Marc Goodner > Subject: NEW Issue: Remove shading from figures > > PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO THIS EMAIL OR START A DISCUSSISON THREAD UNTIL > THE ISSUE IS ASSIGNED A NUMBER. > The issues coordinators will notify the list when that has occurred. > > Protocol: ws-sp > > ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-ed-01-r07-diff > > <http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-sx/download.php/ > 18836/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-ed-01-r07-diff.doc> > > Artifact: spec > > Type: editorial > > Title: Remove shading from figures, possibly enlarge. > > Description: The shading in the figures obscures the text and > makes the > figures harder to read, without adding value. Remove the shading from > the figures. In particular at lines 2630, 2914, 3064. If possible make > these figures slightly larger. > > > Related issues: none > > Proposed Resolution: > Remove the shading from the figures at lines 2630, 2914, 3064. If > possible make these figures slightly larger. > > > regards, Frederick > > Frederick Hirsch > Nokia > > >
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