Issue 95: Editorial: Amend text for nested assertions in WS-SP

["Marc Goodner" <mgoodner@microsoft.com>]

Issue 95

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From: Martin Gudgin 
Sent: Wednesday, July 26, 2006 1:40 AM
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Subject: NEW ISSUE: Editorial: Amend text for nested assertions in WS-SP

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s-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-ed-01-r07-diff.doc>



Artifact:  spec, policy



Type: editorial



Title: Amend text for nested assertions in WS-SP



Description:

Currently the description of the nested assertions in WS-SP reads
something like;

"This optional element indicates that ..."

Some people have expressed confusion over whether such things are policy
assertions or just elements. 



Proposal: 

I propose we update the text for such
assertions to read;

"This optional element is a policy assertion that indicates that ..."

That is, insert 'is a policy assertion that' between 'element' and
'indicates'



Related issues: None



Cheers

Gudge