line 365: change "an X.509 " to "an X.509 certificate"
Line 602-603: "If a requestor desires to extend the duration of the token it uses a custom binding of the renewal mechanism defined in WS-Trust."
"custom" is a word I prefer to avoid in standard specifications. I suggest rewording as follows (consistent with text used to describe the Cancel binding).
"If a requestor desires to extend the duration of the token it uses this specialized binding of the renewal mechanism defined in WS-Trust"
Line 701: change "even in the" to "even if the"
line 776: change "possible" to "possibly"
line 392: change "wst:SecondaryParameter" to "wst:SecondaryParameters"
line 1983: key-wrap-algorithm is in the middle of use-key
lines 2008, 2014, 2020, 2030, 2046: remove periods from sentence fragments used to describe algorithm parameters to be consistent with the rest of the descriptions in this section.
line 2034: change "symmetric key that" to "the symmetric key that" and change "message" to "messages"
line 2040-2042: delete duplicate description of "EncryptWith"