PR issue 6: minor editorial comments on WS-Trust andWS-SecureConversation

[Marc Goodner <mgoodner@microsoft.com>]

PR Issue 6

 

From: Greg Carpenter [mailto:gregcarp@microsoft.com]
Sent: Friday, November 10, 2006 1:25 PM
To: ws-sx@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [ws-sx] New issue: minor editorial comments on WS-Trust and WS-SecureConversation

 

WS-SecureConversation (http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/200512/ws-secureconversation-1.3-spec-cd-01.doc)

line 365: change "an X.509 " to "an X.509 certificate"

Line 602-603: "If a requestor desires to extend the duration of the token it uses a custom binding of the renewal mechanism defined in WS-Trust."

"custom" is a word I prefer to avoid in standard specifications. I suggest rewording as follows (consistent with text used to describe the Cancel binding).

"If a requestor desires to extend the duration of the token it uses this specialized binding of the renewal mechanism defined in WS-Trust"

Line 701: change "even in the"  to "even if the"

line 776: change "possible" to "possibly"

WS-Trust (http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-trust/200512/ws-trust-1.3-spec-cd-01.doc)

line 392: change "wst:SecondaryParameter" to "wst:SecondaryParameters"

line 1983: key-wrap-algorithm is in the middle of use-key

lines 2008, 2014, 2020, 2030, 2046: remove periods from sentence fragments used to describe algorithm parameters to be consistent with the rest of the descriptions in this section.

line 2034: change "symmetric key that" to "the symmetric key that"  and change  "message" to "messages"

line 2040-2042: delete duplicate description of "EncryptWith"