Issue PR027: Editorial comments on WS-SecurityPolicy Public Reviewdocument

[Greg Carpenter <gregcarp@microsoft.com>]

[[ gleaned from the spreadsheet of SP PR comments posted at http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/ws-sx-comment/200704/msg00000.html ]]

Protocol:  ws-securitypolicy

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/200702/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-cd-02-diff.pdf

Artifact:  spec / schema

Type: editorial

Title:

Description: Editorial comments on WS-SecurityPolicy Public Review document

Multiple sections, lines 456, 505,536, 586, 613
Difficult to parse.
Proposal: Replace "binding specific" with "binding-specific"

multiple sections, lines 730, 734:
intended use outside the scope of this specification is immaterial
Proposal: replace "is intended to be used" with "may be used"

section 5.2.2 -- line 733:
verb usage
Proposal: Replace "points" with "pointing"

section 5.4.11 -- line 1552 :
plural agreement
Proposal: Replace "by another specifications" with "in other specifications"

section 8.6 -- line 2460 :
only modifies when, not used
Proposal: Replace "only used when" with "used only when"

Related issues:

None.

Proposed Resolution:

See Description