RE: WS-SX specifications Public Review package

Hi Greg,

The major issue that needs to be fixed is your references to the other specifications as “OASIS Standard”. These should accurately reflect the current state of these specifications as Committee Drafts. Going forward you’ll need to invoke the “designated cross-reference” clause of the TC Process that will allow these references to be updated at each level of approval going forward.

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/process-2008-06-19.php#crossRefs

Other items:

Secure Conversation:

“Location” – should be “Specification URIs”

Create hypertext link for committee name (http://docs.oasis-open.org/committees/ws-sx/)

Footer - Page numbers should be flush right (just add a tab)

Security Policy:

Remove “artifact type”

Create hypertext link for committee name (http://docs.oasis-open.org/committees/ws-sx/)

Trust:

Remove “artifact type”

Create hypertext link for committee name (http://docs.oasis-open.org/committees/ws-sx/)

Footer – delete “OASIS trademark, IPR and other policies apply.”

Normally I would just fix the other items but you’ll need to update the references.

Regards,

Mary

From: Greg Carpenter [mailto:gregcarp@microsoft.com]
Sent: Monday, July 21, 2008 1:25 AM
To: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org
Cc: ws-sx@lists.oasis-open.org; Chris Kaler; Kelvin Lawrence; Marc Goodner
Subject: WS-SX specifications Public Review package

Mary,

The WS-SX TC approved the enclosed specifications as Committee Drafts, and for Public Review, during the July 9 2008 TC meeting (minutes available at http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-sx/email/archives/200807/msg00021.html)

Based on the changes you requested in the recent WS-Federation PR package, I’ve anticipated that you would request the same changes to the WS-SX review package and made them.  I’ve attached both the PR package and the publication diffs as zip files.  The PR package includes RDDL files.  I’ve also drafted the Public Review announcement (see below).

Let me know if you need anything else.

Thanks,

   -greg

To OASIS members, Public Announce Lists:

The OASIS Web Services Secure Exchange(WS-SX) TC has recently approved the following

specifications as Committee Drafts and approved the package for public review:

WS-Trust Version 1.4

WS-SecureConversation Version 1.4

WS-SecurityPolicy Version 1.3

The public review starts today, XX July 2008, and ends XX September 2008. This

is an open invitation to comment. We strongly encourage feedback from potential

users, developers and others, whether OASIS members or not, for the sake of

improving the interoperability and quality of OASIS work. Please feel free to

distribute this announcement within your organization and to other appropriate

mail lists.

More non-normative information about the specification and the technical

committee may be found at the public home page of the TC at

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=ws-sx. Comments may

be submitted to the TC by any person through the use of the OASIS TC Comment

Facility which can be located via the button marked "Send A Comment" at the top

of that page, or directly at

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/index.php?wg_abbrev=ws-sx.

Submitted comments (for this work as well as other works of that TC) are

publicly archived and can be viewed at

http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/ws-sx-comment/. All comments submitted to

OASIS are subject to the OASIS Feedback License, which ensures that the feedback

you provide carries the same obligations at least as the obligations of the TC

members.

The specification document and related files are available here:

WS-Trust:

Editable Source (Authoritative):

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-trust/v1.4/cd/ws-trust-1.4-spec-cd-01.doc

PDF:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-trust/v1.4/cd/ws-trust-1.4-spec-cd-01.pdf

HTML:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-trust/v1.4/cd/ws-trust-1.4-spec-cd-01.html

Schema:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-trust/v1.4/cd/ws-trust.xsd

WS-SecureConversation:

Editable Source (Authoritative):

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/cd/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-cd-01.doc

PDF:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/cd/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-cd-01.pdf

HTML:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/v1.4/cd/ws-secureconversation-1.4-spec-cd-01.html

Schema:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-secureconversation/200512/ws-secureconversation-1.3.xsd

WS-SecurityPolicy:

Editable Source (Authoritative):

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/v1.3/cd/ws-securitypolicy-1.3-spec-cd-01.doc

PDF:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/v1.3/cd/ws-securitypolicy-1.3-spec-cd-01.pdf

HTML:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/v1.3/cd/ws-securitypolicy-1.3-spec-cd-01.html

Schema:

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/v1.3/cd/ws-securitypolicy.xsd

OASIS and the WSFED TC welcome your comments.

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