Re: [ws-sx] Changes Required to Submitted Document (TCADMIN-196)

["Rich.Levinson" <rich.levinson@oracle.com>]

Hi Kelvin,

Yes, I will take the lead on these items. Note that I believe one of the 
"issues", #3, about removal of RFC 2119, was explicitly the item that 
the latest update was about, so we should get any clarifications about 
whether this "needs" to be in or not, because the TC decision was to 
explicitly remove it, primarily to emphasize that there was nothing 
specifically normative within the examples document itself, although the 
examples themselves relied on normative requirements as the environment 
in which they were developed and in several cases, executed.

    Thanks,
    Rich

Kelvin Lawrence wrote:
> Thanks Kim
>
> We will get working on the issues you have raised.
>
> Rich are you able to take the lead on these updates?
>
>
> Cheers
> Kelvin
> WSSX TC (co)Chair
>
> -----Kim Goolsby <kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org> wrote: -----
>
>     To: ws-sx@lists.oasis-open.org
>     From: Kim Goolsby <kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org>
>     Date: 07/12/2010 02:33PM
>     Cc: Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>
>     Subject: [ws-sx] Changes Required to Submitted Document (TCADMIN-196)
>
>     Please make the following required changes to
>     document /ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-03
>     <http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-032.doc>:
>
>     1. For 'This Version', the underlying hyperlinks are incorrect.
>     Please change from
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-032.doc
>      to
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-03.doc.
>     Please make this change for the html & pdf files as well.
>
>     2. For 'Previous Version', the underlying hyperlinks are
>     incorrect. Please change from
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-021.doc
>      to
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-02.doc.
>     Please make this change for the html & pdf files as well.
>
>     3. In 'Normative References', [RFC2119] was somehow dropped
>     between cd02 and cd03. Please re-add to cd03.
>
>     4. In 'Normative References', [WS-SECURITYPOLICY] contains an
>     invalid underlying hyperlink. Please change from
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/200702/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-os.doc%20http:/www.oasis-open.org/specs/index.php#wssecpolv1.2
>     to
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/200702/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-os.doc.
>
>     5. In 'Non-Normative References', WSSX-PRE-INTEROP contains an
>     invalid link. Please change from http://www.oasis
>     open.org/committees/download.php/16357/Trust_SecureConversation_Interop.2004-10.doc
>     <http://open.org/committees/download.php/16357/Trust_SecureConversation_Interop.2004-10.doc>
>     to
>     http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples.html.
>
>     6. In 'Non-Normative References', WS-SECURE-INTEROP contains an
>     invalid underlying hyperlink. Please change from
>      http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/28803/ws-sx-secure-message-examples.doc%20http:/www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=28803&wg_abbrev=ws-sx
>     <http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/28803/ws-sx-secure-message-examples.doc%20http:/www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=28803&wg_abbrev=ws-sx>
>     to
>     http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/28803/ws-sx-secure-message-examples.doc
>
>     7. In 'Non-Normative References',  WSI-SCM-SAMPLEAPPL contains the
>     following login required link:
>      http://www.ws-i.org/SampleApplications/SupplyChainManagement/2006-04/SCMSecurityArchitectureWGD5.00.doc
>     (login required). Please change to
>     http://java.sun.com/webservices/docs/1.4/wsi-sampleapp/index.html
>
>     8. For 'References', it is preferable to have the hyperlink point
>     to the document at doc.oasis-open.org <http://doc.oasis-open.org>
>     server rather than /oasis-open.org/committees/
>     <http://oasis-open.org/committees/>. Please change the links on
>     the following references:
>
>     Normative:
>     * [WSS11-SOAPMSG] 
>     * [WSS11-USERNAME] 
>     * [WSS11-X509-PROFILE]
>     * [WSS11-SAML1120-PROFILE]  
>     * [WSS-TC-ALL-TOKEN-PROFILES]
>     * [SAML11-CORE]
>
>     Non-Normative:
>     * WSS10-INTEROP-01
>     * WSS10-INTEROP-02
>     * WSS11-INTEROP-01
>     * WSS10-KERBEROS-INTEROP
>     * WSS10-SAML11-INTEROP
>     * WSS11-SAML1120-INTEROP
>     * WSSX-PRE-INTEROP
>     * WSSX-WSTR-WSSC-INTEROP
>     * WS-SECURE-INTEROP
>
>     Thank you,
>     Kim
>
>     -- 
>     Kim Goolsby
>     Publications Specialist
>     OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
>     email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org <mailto:kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org>
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>
>
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