Re: [ws-tx] - Re: Groups - New Action Item #0058 Review use of RFC2119 keywords ...

["Monica J. Martin" <Monica.Martin@Sun.COM>]

> Thomas Freund wrote: Monica,
>
> Wouldn't it be more precise to say ...
>
> The participant SHOULD complete application processing and SHOULD 
> transmit the Completed notification.
>
mm2: It depends on where you wish to place the emphasis and the 
requirements, Tom.  My observation was that the emphasis was on the 
latter part of this sentence. Thanks.

>
> mm1: Tom, have you considered rewriting this sentence to be more
> consistent with other similar sentence structures, and improve
> understanding of the requirement:
> Change from:
> 352 Upon receipt of this notification the participant knows that it will
> receive no new requests for work
> 353 within the business activity. It should complete application
> processing and transmit the
> 354 Completed notification.
> Change to:
> 352 Upon receipt of this notification the participant knows that it will
> receive no new requests for work
> 353 within the business activity. The participant completes application
> processing and SHOULD transmit the
> 354 Completed notification.
>