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Subject: Re: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-0.5-20040226.zip uploaded
A few more editorial comments: Logical Model o) The new words for the diagram are good, but "enables" wasn't incorporated into the intro paragraph. Here is my suggestion for the second sentence: "In other words, a Manageability Provider may enable many resources to become manageable resources, ..." Role Definitions o) I thought we were going to make this a subsection (2.4.1) of Logical Model. o) It would also be helpful to go ahead and use the same terminology throughout - thus use Manageability Consumer, Manageability Provider, and Manageable Resource. Yes, I wrote this originally so you can blame me for the inconsistency :-) So change the text throughout this section. o) Also, paragraph 3 should remove reference to the infrastructure and just refer to the three major roles, something like: "The major roles are the Manageability Consumer, the Manageability Provider, and the Manageable Resource. These roles are represented ..." -- John DeCarlo, The MITRE Corporation, My Views Are My Own email: jdecarlo@mitre.org voice: 703-883-7116 fax: 703-883-3383 DISA cube: 703-882-0593
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