RE: [wsdm] Capability naming in the specs (editorial)

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The way it is right now does not read well and may be misinterpreted. For the sake of being understandable I think we need to fix it in the normative part of the spec.

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From: Heather Kreger [mailto:kreger@us.ibm.com]
Sent: Thursday, October 28, 2004 2:43 PM
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Subject: Re: [wsdm] Capability naming in the specs (editorial)

yuck.
It has WSDM/relatoinships, that implies relationships in the context of WSDM (the same goes for the others as well).
I don't support qualifying everything with 'Manageable'. Its just cluttered.

Heather Kreger
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"Sedukhin, Igor S" <Igor.Sedukhin@ca.com>

"Sedukhin, Igor S" <Igor.Sedukhin@ca.com>

10/26/2004 09:28 PM

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Subject	[wsdm] Capability naming in the specs (editorial)

I think 5.1 should say "Manageable Relationships", otherwise it hangs out there and it may be hard to understand if this is a capability of some sorts ot relationships of capabilities applicable to management. Just looking at the document it becomes not quite obvious.

Generally, this is true for other capabilities as well e.g. "Manageable Metrics" rather than "Metrics" and "Manageable State" rather than just "State", etc.
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Subject: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-1.0-20041026.doc uploaded

The document wd-wsdm-muws-1.0-20041026.doc has been submitted by William Vambenepe (vbp@hp.com) to the OASIS Web Services Distributed Management (WSDM) TC document repository.

Document Description:
Removed "platform" appendix

Included URIs for capabilities

Some clean-up

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