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Subject: Re: [wsdm] Heather's relationships rewording AI
- From: Heather Kreger <kreger@us.ibm.com>
- To: Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
- Date: Wed, 1 Dec 2004 14:29:05 -0500
ok for me!
Heather Kreger
STSM, Web Services Lead Architect for SWG Emerging Technologies
Author of "Java and JMX: Building Manageable Systems"
kreger@us.ibm.com
919-543-3211 (t/l 441) cell:919-496-9572
Mark Ellison <ellison@ieee.org>
12/01/2004 04:09 PM
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rewording AI |
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Heather,
For readability, might I suggest the language inline...
Regards,
Mark
Heather Kreger wrote:
Heather will modify sentence in second para of 4.2.1
I would change:
In general, this capability is not more specific than
what is described above. That is, an endpoint MAY support any message exchanges
it needs to provide access to the relationship. The message exchanges may
entirely be management model specific.
to:
The endpoint in this case is not a WSDM Manageable resource,
merely a WS-Resource. The next section describes relationships as WSDM
Manageable resources. The relationship access enpoint supports any message
exchanges, which are relationship and management model specific, that are
needed to provide access to the relationship.
The endpoint in this case is not a WSDM Manageable resource,
merely a WS-Resource. The next section describes relationships as WSDM
Manageable resources. The relationship access enpoint supports any exchange
of messages, where the exchange is specific to a particular relationship
and management model, and, where the exchange is necessary in order to
provide access to the relationship.
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