RE: [wsdm] Groups - Primer with Heather's updates for Metadataand Extending capabilities (wd-wsdm

["Vaughn Bullard" <vbullard@amberpoint.com>]

Nitpicking again.  Should we not say "This primer should prepare the reader
to understand....."  .  

 

-----Original Message-----
From: Mark Peel [mailto:mpeel@novell.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2005 12:49 PM
To: Kirk Wilson; wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - Primer with Heather's updates for Metadataand
Extending capabilities (wd-wsdm


  We might begin to address Kirk's point by recasting the first sentence of
the introduction:

"Reading this primer should prepare the reader to understand the
specifications that make up the WSDM standard (Management of Web Services
and Management Using Web Services; abbreviated MOWS and MUWS) and also some
of that standard's supporting specifications (e.g., WS-ResourceProperties
and WS-BaseNotification)."

Cheers,


Mark Peel
Web Services Infrastructure
Novell, Inc.

>>> "Wilson, Kirk D" <Kirk.Wilson@ca.com> 9/7/2005 9:39:00 am >>>
Heather, Bryan,

Question on some changes in section 1.  I noticed in this version, a number
of occurrences of "WSDM" in the Primer Introduction were changed to the more
technically correct "MUWS" or "MOWS".  However, for the reader, the
distinction between MUWS and MOWS is not introduced until section 1.2.4.2.
Doesn't the change assume that the reader is already going to be familiar
with the organization of the specification before reading the introduction?



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