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Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - Primer with Heather's updates for Metadataand Extending capabilities (wd-wsdm
If this is truly a standalone document, then we should not refer to "this primer". What primer? Where is it (in relation to the document they are reading)? Perhaps refer to "this document" or "this introduction". Kirk Wilson Architect, Development Office of the CTO 802 765-4337 -----Original Message----- From: Mark Peel [mailto:mpeel@novell.com] Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2005 12:49 PM To: Wilson, Kirk D; wsdm@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - Primer with Heather's updates for Metadataand Extending capabilities (wd-wsdm We might begin to address Kirk's point by recasting the first sentence of the introduction: "Reading this primer should prepare the reader to understand the specifications that make up the WSDM standard (Management of Web Services and Management Using Web Services; abbreviated MOWS and MUWS) and also some of that standard's supporting specifications (e.g., WS-ResourceProperties and WS-BaseNotification)." Cheers, Mark Peel Web Services Infrastructure Novell, Inc. >>> "Wilson, Kirk D" <Kirk.Wilson@ca.com> 9/7/2005 9:39:00 am >>> Heather, Bryan, Question on some changes in section 1. I noticed in this version, a number of occurrences of "WSDM" in the Primer Introduction were changed to the more technically correct "MUWS" or "MOWS". However, for the reader, the distinction between MUWS and MOWS is not introduced until section 1.2.4.2. Doesn't the change assume that the reader is already going to be familiar with the organization of the specification before reading the introduction?
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