RE: CD 01 PR package

["Mary McRae" <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>]

Hi Marc,

 

  I’m attaching a change-tracked/commented version of the spec – experiment: is this more helpful than just a list of comments?

 

Changes needed:

1.       Need to identify the specific committee draft version (Committee Draft 01, 02, etc.)

2.       Need the exact approval date (25 June 2008, etc.)

3.       TC needs to declare one of the three formats as authoritative; needs to be noted following the specific URI in parens “(Authoritative)”

4.       Documents are not allowed to be “hidden” under namespaces acting as directories. Documents/schemas must be located under the prescribed path (docs.oasis-open.org/wsfed/federation/v1.2/{cd01}/[filename] – where “cd01” is optional but preferred

5.       We are migrating to a system where namespaces are explicitly identified by the use of ‘ns’ in the URI path (which avoids the confusion identified in #4 above). The ns should either immediately precede or follow the tc shortname (i.e. /ns/wsfed/ or /wsfed/ns/)

6.       Date needs to be added to running footer; also remove “OASIS trademark, IPR and other policies apply.”

7.       Conformance section needs to be the last numbered section in the spec immediately preceding Appendix A.

8.       Corresponding changes to the namespace document to reflect the proper file URIs

 

Regards,

 

Mary

 

From: Marc Goodner [mailto:mgoodner@microsoft.com]
Sent: Wednesday, July 02, 2008 2:22 PM
To: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org; Kelvin Lawrence; Chris Kaler
Cc: wsfed@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: CD 01 PR package

 

Mary, please let me know if everything looks in order.

ws-federation-1.2-spec-cd-01.doc