Re: [wsn] Groups - wsn-WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01k.doc (wsn-WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01l-3.doc) uploaded

["Hideharu Kato" <hideharu@sdl.hitachi.co.jp>]

In WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01l-3.doc, the following should be fixed.

Line 1169:
The description about UnacceptableTerminationTimeFault of Renew request is 
wrong. It seems to me that it was just copied from those of Subscribe 
request.

Line 1063:
"Destroy" should be "CreatePullPoint" instead.


Hideharu Kato


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(wsn-WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01l-3.doc) uploaded


> The document revision named wsn-WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01k.doc
> (wsn-WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01l-3.doc) has been submitted by Mr
> William Vambenepe to the OASIS Web Services Notification (WSN) TC document
> repository.  This document is revision #2 of
> wsn-WS-BaseNotification-1.3-draft-01i.doc.
>
> Document Description:
> Peter's list of things to fix:
>
> 2.6   Remove references to WS-Trust and WS-SecureConversation from
> security section
>
> 2.34 MultipleTopicsSpecifiedFault missing from Schema and WSDL
>
> 2.34 suffix "Fault" missing from name of several faults in 4.2, 5.1.4, 
> 5.2,
> 6.1.1, 6.1.2
>
> 2.52:Need to make TopicExpression Dialect minOccurs="0" in schema and xsd
>
> 2.55 Replace the unresolved [WSRF] reference at the start of section 6
>
> 2.55 remove refs to WS-Policy etc from the requirements section (1.1.1)
> (could simply remove the entire bullet for this one)
>
> 2.55 generalize ref to WS-Policy in wsnt:SubscriptionPolicy text
>
> It would be good if the editors could fix some of the other remaining
> issues, and also a number of Typos..
>
> - SubscriptionManger in section 6.
> - Notication appears in several places instead of Notification
> - Pause and Resume talk about  "PauseSubscriptionMessage request" and
> "ResumeSubscriptionMessage request" instead of "PauseSubscription
> request"
> / "ResumeSubscription request"
> - GetMessages sometimes talks about GetMessage (missing s)
>
> Other things that we need to do:
>
> 1. Abstract needs some tidying up, for example it still talks about White
> Papers 2. The formatting of the Subscribe text needs to be fixed, it goes
> into bold and short line lengths 3. Acknowledgements list. We have had no
> responses to our email, so the default is simply to copy in the list we
> circulated 4. Need to include a wsnt: definition of BaseFaults and rebase
> the Fault messages on that, so as to solve the schema validation problem. 
> I
> understand that WSRF-BF will change to put the any before the timestamp
>
> ****
>
> Changes made by Dave Hull in draft K based on Peter's comments:
>
> I've executed on the items in the attached email, with the following
> notes/caveats/etc.  I first accepted the changes for draft k, after noting
> them in the change log, so the changes you see will just be the latest.
> Sorry for the delay.
>
> "2.55 generalize ref to WS-Policy in wsnt:SubscribePolicy text".  I just
> took out the reference.  The first paragraph talks generally about policy
> grammars, of which WS-Policy would be one.  We could specifically say
> "policy grammar such as WS-Policy" or such, but that probably wouldn't
> help.
>
> I didn't do item 4 of the "Other things we need to do", which pertained to
> rebasing the Fault messages on that, so as to solve the schema validation
> problem, as I don't know exactly what the problem is (though I probably
> should know).
>
> I believe that there are still statements in the first part of section 7
> that are redundant, or nearly so, with statements in the last part.  I was
> going to do a proposal for rework, but haven't found time yet.
>
> ***
>
> Additional changes made by William Vambenepe:
>
> - remove reference to WS-Coordination and WS-Federation in "relationship 
> to
> other specs" section
> - fix the "WS-those" typo by changing "WS-those" to "those".
>
>
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