Issue verification for 3.23, 3.24, 3.25, 3.26, 3.27, and 3.28

[Peter Niblett <peter_niblett@uk.ibm.com>]

Lily

Thanks for making these updates. I have reviewed them...

WSN3.23
- Changes look good, except that you don't have change bars in section 7.2.
I think we should try to have change bars in our Public Review 2, so that
the changes since PR1 draft are visible to everyone. So if possible, could
you insert change bars here.

- One other point I noticed: the [action] URI at line 676 contains a space
character between brw-1/ and Publisher. This should be removed.

WSN 3.24
I have a few changes to the text that was included in the issues doc:
- Line 530 talks about a "NotificationConsumer WS-Resource". I don't think
there's any need for the thing actually to be a WS-Resource. Could you
change this to say "NotificationConsumer resource"?
- Line 532 "Any Notiifications Messages" should be "Any Notification
Messages".
- Line 535. Please remove the last sentence (which got into the issues log
by mistake) "That mechanism is not defined by this specification".
Also
- Line 964: ConsumerReference in the XSD should have minOccurs="1" not "0"

WSN 3.25

Verified ok

WSN 3.26

- Lines 1110 - 1118. You should remove the WSDL message definitions for
these faults.
- Lines 1229/1231. Need to change these to use wsn-bw: not wsn-brw:

WSN 3.27
As well as changing the URI, WS-Addressing have moved the schema (putting a
ws-addr.xsd into its location). You need to change the schema location at
line 873 so that it becomes
schemaLocation="http://www.w3.org/2005/08/addressing/ws-addr.xsd";


WSN3.28.
- In line 218 you say that NotificationBroker aggregates the
CreatePullPoint interface. This should be deleted
- In line 342 you should say  "aggregates the three portTypes" instead of
"aggregates the four portTypes"
- Lines 1130-1133 - you should remove the WSDL message definition for the
PullNotificationNotSupportedFault


Also at today's meeting we decided to change all our Namespace URIs, schema
locations and [action] MAPs to use -2 instead of -1. So could you change
all the

http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsn/b-1 to http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsn/b-2
and similarly for bw, br, brw.


Thanks

Peter Niblett
IBM Senior Technical Staff Member



                                                                           
             Lily Liu                                                      
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