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Subject: Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-01-06.pdf uploaded
Hi Sunil, Thanks for your prompt review and comments. I will check the spec with your comments, hopefully before the F2F. Thanks, Iwasa ----- Original Message ----- From: "Sunil Kunisetty" <Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com> To: <kiwasa@jp.fujitsu.com> Cc: <wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org> Sent: Wednesday, January 07, 2004 7:09 AM Subject: Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-01-06.pdf uploaded > > Hi Iwasa, > > Here are some quick technical and editorial comments on v 0.85. I'll have more detailed > and thorough comments before the F2F. > > > Technical > > - Section 3 (Message Format). > - replyTo is not an element rather an attribute of ReplyPattern (pgs. 15 & 16) > - For PollRequest, GroupId is a required element (minOccurs = 1) (pg. 16) > > - Section 3.1/Table1 (pg. 17) > - Timestamp should be removed from the child elements. It was removed when > TTL was renamed to ExpiryTime > - Many more Faults to be added > > - Section 3.1.1/Table 2 (pg. 18) > - Add InvalidGroupParameter fault to the table (also change INVALID_GROUP_PARAMETER > to InvalidGroupParameter on line 555) > > - Section 3.3.1/Pg. 24 > - GroupId under PollRequest is different from GroupId in MessageHeader in 2 ways. > i) It has zero or more SequenceNumberRange elements > ii) It also has an attribute called 'value'. it's type is the same as the type of GroupId in MessageHeader > (because of REL-94) > > - Section 3.3.1.1/SequenceNumberRange > - It has 2 attributes called 'from' and 'to', both of type unsignedLong (pg. 24-25) > (because of REL-94) > > - Section 3.4/ResponseElement (pg. 25). > - Response Element has only one child element called RefToGroupId. > - RefToGroupId has an attribute called 'value' of type MIDType and can have zero or more > RefToSequenceNumber elements. > > - Section 3.3.1/Table 14 (RefToGroupId/pg. 26) > - Should have a new attribute called 'value' > > - Section 3.3.1.1/Table 15 (RefToSequenceNumber/pg. 26) > - Should have 2 new attributes called 'from' and 'to'. > > Editorial: > > - The Termination conditions (in pg. 11) uses GroupExpiryTime and GroupMaxIdleDuration. > It should be consistent with the actual attribute names (starting with lower cases). > > - When attributes are mentioned in the Table, please list their types. Ex. status (string) > > - ReplyTo attribute (in Section 3.1.4/pg. 21) should be replyTo (all attributes start with lower > case). > > - Please add the schema as an appendix > > - Section 2.4/Line no. 259. > It should read "after the message has been processed and delivered to the "next processing layer". > > - Figures 1-2-3 on pgs. 8-9 may need to be updated to show the "next processor entity" as per our > new definitions. > > - All the new terms such as Group Termination, Removal, Complete etc... should be defined > in the terminology section > > > Thanks, > -Sunil > > > > kiwasa@jp.fujitsu.com wrote: > > > The document revision WS-Reliability-2004-01-06.pdf has been submitted by Kazunori Iwasa (kiwasa@jp.fujitsu.com) to the OASIS Web Services Reliable Messaging TC document repository. > > This document is revision #14 of WS-Reliability-2003-09-05b.pdf. > > > > Document Description: > > January6,2004(WD0.85): > > Section2.4, Section2.5, and Section > > 3.1.1 are updated to incorporate > > resolutions for Rel-52, Rel-57, and Rel- > > 82. > > -- > > > > WD0.84:This was updated for: > > Rel-33:Section 1.8: Update on Message Delivery and Acknowledgment Message, > > Rel-50:Section 3.1.3 ExpiryTime, and > > Editorial updates > > -- > > > > WD0.83:This was updated for: > > Section2.6: Added description of Figure3 > > Section3: Added tables for each element > > Rel-31: Section2.5 > > Rel-38: Timestamp was removed from Section 3 > > Rel-100: Added Section2.9 Attachments > > Rel-32: Added definitions to Section1.8 > > Rel-94: Figure5 and Section 3.3 > > (Needs additional descriptions and examples in Section3.3) > > Editorial updates, especially for : > > http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200310/msg00054.html > > All editorial comments above are updated except one, which is a comment for line 357, to keep consistency with other sections. > > -- > > > > WD0.70:This was updated for > > Section 2 : Messaging Models > > Section 3 : Message Format,and others > > Section 5 : HTTP Binding > > Editorial updates > > -- > > > > WD0.54:This was updated for > > Issue Rel-38 : Section 3.1.3 Timestamp > > Issue Rel-98 : Section 3.1.2 and 3.2.3 > > Issue Rel-40 : Section 3.1.4 > > Issue Rel-88 : Section 3.1.1 > > Issue Rel-16 : Section 3.2.1 to 3.2.3 > > Issue Rel-14 : Appendix C > > Editorial update > > -- > > WD0.52:This was updated with resolution from Prelim minutes for 4/Sep/2003 at: > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/email/archives/200309/msg00010.html > > > > I believe all resolved issues are updated in this WD. > > > > Download Document: > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/4889/WS-Reliability-2004-01-06.pdf > > > > View Document Details: > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/document.php?document_id=4889 > > > > Revision: > > This document is revision #14 of WS-Reliability-2003-09-05b.pdf. 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