[Editorial] Section 4

[Tony Graham <Tony.Graham@Sun.COM>]

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Change 'XML namespaces' to 'XML Namespaces' to match the label in the normative references section.

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Change 'qos' to 'QoS' (or to 'Quality of Service').

Add a space to 'parameters(AckRequested' to make it 'parameters (AckRequested'.

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Add '/>' at the end of the line.

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This one-item list doesn't have the usual lead-in sentence so it is out of place as it is.

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Remove one 'attribute'.

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Change 'section' to 'Section'.

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Change 'lower number with the same groupId' to 'the same groupId value and a lower number value'.


Regards,


Tony Graham
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