[Editorial] Section 7

[Tony Graham <Tony.Graham@Sun.COM>]

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Add short labels, e.g., '[XML]', and use the labels where the specs are referred to in the body of this spec.

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Should the reference to SOAP 1.2 be a normative reference?  SOAP 1.2 is mentioned in conjunction with SOAP 1.1 on lines 74, 140, and others.

Regards,


Tony Graham
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