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Subject: Re: [wsrm] editorial comments on V0.991 with "history"
Jacques Durand wrote: > Editorial comments on V0.991, attached. > Jacques Comment on Line 89 asks to replace text, but does not give the proposed replacement text. Jacques Comment on Line 220 does not provide exact text to add for examples 2, 3 and 4. ----- I also add two of my own Editorial comments: Lines 637 and 654 - the key boxes use the words mandatory and optional. This needs to be changed to cardinality 0 or 1 and cardinality 1. Line 871 : change "Response and Poll" to "Response or Poll" ---------------------------------------------------- Tom Rutt email: tom@coastin.com; trutt@fsw.fujitsu.com Tel: +1 732 801 5744 Fax: +1 732 774 5133
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