Re: [wsrm] New Editor's draft .996 posted (with Jacques Refactoringchanges)

[Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com>]

While working on this latest editor's draft .996 I noteced the following:

1) the diagrams need to change "application layer" to "producer" or 
"consumer" throughout the document.

2) some of the level three headings are not showing the heading numbers.

3) the new annex which points at the normative schema needs to be added.

4) action item on Pete and Jacques needs to be completed and is not in here.

5) some of Tony Grahams editorial items were indicatated as needing 
further discussion by Iwasa.

Tom Rutt

Tom Rutt wrote:

> I just posted the following three views of editor’s draft .996, which 
> incorporates the action item by Jacques Durand to re-actor the .995 
> draft text.
>
> The changes were made by Jacques, but I posted it on his behalf.
>
> It does not yet reflect the action item from Pete and Jacques to 
> resolve the W3c protocol group comments.
>
> The open office document, without changes:
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/6609/WS-Reliability-ED996.sxw 
>
>
> The pdf version, without changes (use this one for line numbers in 
> your comments against draft .996):
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/6610/WS-Reliability-ED996.pdf 
>
>
> The pdf version with changes indicated against the Aug 29 .995 version 
> posted by Iwasa.
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/6612/WS-Reliability-ED996diff995.pdf 
>
>

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