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Subject: Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-05-26.pdf uploaded
Here are a few comments based on my quick review of 0.999. Proposed changes that may require discussion: 18-22: Comment process: Should describe use of the comment web form, not the mailing list(?) Perhaps there is new boilerplate available for this. 1205-1206: This section describes the three binding pattern - "Response", "Callback", and "Poll" binding pattern for HTTP. These binding pattern is -> This section describes the HTTP bindings for the three message reply patterns - "Response", "Callback", and "Poll". These patterns are [Other uses of "binding pattern" throughout this chapter?] 1474: Insert new paragraph: It has implemented all required syntax, features and behaviors. [Are the requirements identified in some consistent manner throughout the document?] 1563: mustUnderstand ... value equal to 1 or "true" Editorial issues: Table of Contents: Page numbers off by one beginning around Chapter 6. Can the ToC items be turned into hyperlinks for easier navigation? 105-106, 946-952: extraneous highlighting 240: extraneous hyphen 248: distinguishes two -> distinguishes between two 250: reliable -> reliability 254: derive -> are derived 270: to -> of 277: as different -> as a different 358: to initially have knowledge of the RM Agreement -> to have knowledge of the RM Agreement initially 382: will however greatly -> will, however, greatly 393: notify a delivery error to the Payload Producer -> notify the Payload Producer of a delivery error 394: receiving -> Receiving 407: with same identity -> with the same Message Identifier 656: of ReplyTo element -> of the ReplyTo element 674: Request/ MessageOrder -> Request/MessageOrder 905-906: extraneous line break and spaces 1022, 1308: extraneous blue text color 1472: conform -> conformant 1485: to NOT implement -> NOT to implement Section numbering: 579: 4.2.1.3 584: 4.2.1.4 592: 4.2.1.5 599: 4.2.1.6 655: 4.2.3.2.1 --Pete Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com> Senior Architect, SeeBeyond Standards & Product Strategy +1-626-471-6311 (US-Pacific)
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