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Subject: Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-05-26.pdf uploaded

Here are a few comments based on my quick review of 0.999.

Proposed changes that may require discussion:
  18-22: Comment process: Should describe use of the comment web form,
    not the mailing list(?)  Perhaps there is new boilerplate
    available for this.
  1205-1206: This section describes the three binding pattern -
    "Response", "Callback", and "Poll" binding pattern for HTTP. These
    binding pattern is
    This section describes the HTTP bindings for the three message reply
    patterns - "Response", "Callback", and "Poll".  These patterns are
    [Other uses of "binding pattern" throughout this chapter?]
  1474: Insert new paragraph:
    It has implemented all required syntax, features and behaviors.
    [Are the requirements identified in some consistent manner
    throughout the document?]
  1563: mustUnderstand ... value equal to 1 or "true"

Editorial issues:
  Table of Contents: Page numbers off by one beginning around Chapter 6.
    Can the ToC items be turned into hyperlinks for easier navigation?
  105-106, 946-952: extraneous highlighting
  240: extraneous hyphen
  248: distinguishes two -> distinguishes between two
  250: reliable -> reliability
  254: derive -> are derived
  270: to -> of
  277: as different -> as a different
  358: to initially have knowledge of the RM Agreement -> to have
    knowledge of the RM Agreement initially
  382: will however greatly -> will, however, greatly
  393: notify a delivery error to the Payload Producer -> notify the
    Payload Producer of a delivery error
  394: receiving -> Receiving
  407: with same identity -> with the same Message Identifier
  656: of ReplyTo element -> of the ReplyTo element
  674: Request/ MessageOrder -> Request/MessageOrder
  905-906: extraneous line break and spaces
  1022, 1308: extraneous blue text color
  1472: conform -> conformant
  1485: to NOT implement -> NOT to implement

Section numbering:

Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
Senior Architect, SeeBeyond
Standards & Product Strategy
+1-626-471-6311 (US-Pacific)

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