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Subject: Re: [wsrm] Full agenda for wsrm tc teleconf 6/8/04


Ignore the dates on the first few lines they are wrong

Tom Rutt wrote:

> The full agenda with links is attached.
>
> We have two potential votes scheduled for today's meeting.
>
> Tom Rutt
> WSRM TC Chair
>
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Full Agenda of WSRM TC Conference Call –May 25, 2004
>
>The meeting of the WSRM TC  will take place by teleconference 
>
> Tuesday, June 1, 2004, from 5:30 to 7:30 PM Eastern Standard Time
>
> Conference Bridge number
> Toll only : 1-512-225-3050
> Participant code: 716071
>
>
>   1 Draft Agenda:
>
> Draft Agenda to WSRM TC Conference Call
>
> 1 Roll Call
>
> 2 Minutes Discussion
>
> 2.1 Appointment of Minute Taker
>
> 2.2 Approval of previous meeting minutes –
>
> 3 Action Item Status Review
>
> 4 Discussions of unresolved editorial comments
>
> 5 Discussion of Document progression
>
> 6 Scheduled Vote for CD
>
> 7 Scheduled Vote to Submit to OASIS for member vote
>
> 6 Discussion of FAQ for WS-Reliability
>
>
>   2 Roll Call
>
> Attendance:
>
> Meeting ?? quorate.
>
>
>   3 Minutes Discussion
>
>
>     3.1 Appointment of Minute Taker
>
> Tom Rutt will take minutes.
>
> Minutes will serve to record issue resolutions.
>
>
>     3.2 Approval of previous meeting minutes
>
> The minutes of the June 01 teleconf are posted at:
>
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7101/MinutesWSRMTC060104.htm 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/6979/MinutesWSRM-052504.htm> 
>
>
>
>   4 Status of Action Items
>
> · *Action Item status as of 6/3/04* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00014.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 3 Jun 2004 17:44:53 -0000
>
>
>   5 Discussion of Issues and editorial Comments
>
> The following issues list includes one open item which need further 
> discussion:
>
> · · *Updated public comments issues list posted* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00020.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 4 Jun 2004 00:45:00 -0000
>
>
>     5.1 Namespace for Schema, and location
>
> · *Re: [wsrm] Action Item status as of 6/3/04* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00023.html>
> /From/ Sunil Kunisetty <sunil.kunisetty@oracle.com> on 4 Jun 2004 
> 05:44:50 -0000
>
> · *Groups - ws-reliability-1.1.xsd uploaded* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00038.html>
> /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:06:11 -0000
>
> · *Groups - reference-1.1.xsd uploaded* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00037.html>
> /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:05:59 -0000
>
> · *Groups - fnp-1.1.xsd uploaded* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00036.html>
> /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:05:43 -0000
>
> · *Groups - wsrmfp-1.1.xsd uploaded* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00035.html>
> /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:05:29 -0000
>
> Tom: changes applied to 1.01F, all filenames have 1.1 in their name.
>
>
>     5.2 Editorial comments on Draft 1.01
>
>
>       5.2.1 Tom Rutt Comments
>
> · *Detailed Editorial Fixes for Sections 1 - 4 of ED 1.01* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00026.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 5 Jun 2004 19:58:05 -0000
>
> · *Editorial changes for Sections 5 onward to Draft 1.01* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00027.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 5 Jun 2004 21:05:46 -0000
>
> Tom: All changes applied to editing drafts 1.01E and 1.01F
>
>
>       5.2.2 Jacques Durand Comments
>
> · *Re: [wsrm] editorial comments on 101* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00041.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 8 Jun 2004 04:09:51 -0000
>
> Changes applies to Editing draft 1.01F
>
>
>       5.2.3 Mark Peel Comments
>
> Email from Mark Peel:
>
> Some proofreading corrections: the line numbers are from the 06-04
>
> document. I didn't have time to proof the whole document. If you don't
>
> feel these are appropriate, I don't mind if you omit them.
>
> Mark Peel
>
> Web Services Infrastructure
>
> Novell, Inc.
>
> 134: Erroneous capitalization
>
> in Table 1, replace "E.g" with "e.g."
>
> 150: Typo
>
> appears to contain a doublespace after the comma
>
> 228: Improper usage (e.g. is used to join parenthetical material within
>
> a sentence)
>
> replace "E.g., The" with "For example, the"
>
> 244: Erroneous capitalization
>
> "For" should be "for"
>
> 344: omit needless word
>
> change "and to not support" into "and not support" -- omits "to",
>
> which adds nothing to meaning.
>
> 328: use a form consistent with definition
>
> "Group scope. All" to "Group scope: all"
>
> 328: use a form consistent with definition
>
> "Message scope. A" to "Message scope: a"
>
> 348: Confusing phrase
>
> ", that is a parameter affecting the entire group" -- I don't know
>
> what this clause means. Does it intend to explain why GroupExpiryTime
>
> can change dynamically? It doesn't do a good job of it. I suggest
>
> striking this clause and putting a period after GroupExpiryTime.
>
> 401: typo
>
> appears to contain a doublespace in "the resending"
>
> 498: Inconsistent capitalization
>
> change "Schema" to "schema" to conform to previous line.
>
> 498-499: Wordy sentence construction
>
> "If there are additional elements that are not described in this
>
> specification present in message,"
>
> Better as "If a message contains additional elements not described in
>
> this specification,"
>
> 546: Inconsistent capitalization
>
> "@GroupId" should change to "@groupId", making it consistent with the
>
> other attribute descriptions that follow.
>
> 606: typo
>
> "incremented of 1" should be "incremented by 1"
>
> 629: Erroneous capitalization
>
> "Note: Given" to "Note: given"
>
> 629-630: unclear sentence construction
>
> "in case Duplicate Elimination is required, when a received message is
>
> processed,"
>
> Better "when a received message requiring Duplicate Elimination is
>
> processed,"
>
> 673: Improper usage (e.g. is used to join parenthetical material within
>
> a sentence)
>
> "E.g., If" to "For example, if"
>
> 691: typo
>
> "things," to "things" -- there's no balancing comma to the one
>
> following "things" and we can omit it.
>
> 693: series not properly punctuated
>
> "element)" should really be "element)," -- but most written English
>
> seems to omit that comma these days, so I don't insist on adding it
>
> here.
>
> 759: omitted article
>
> "by reference-schema" to "by the reference-schema" -- adds back "the"
>
> into the sentence
>
> 764: omitted article
>
> "of ReplyTo" to "of the ReplyTo"
>
> 765: omitted article
>
> "with URI" to "with a value of type URI"
>
> 783: consistent usage
>
> "groupId attribute" to "@groupId attribute", a change required twice on
>
> this line. This is consistent with earlier sections describing
>
> attributes.
>
> 801: typo
>
> "ispecifies" to "specifies"
>
> 805: change passive voice to active voice, reduce wordy phrase
>
> "which is polling" to "asking"
>
> 837: change passive voice to active voice
>
> "is using" to "uses"
>
> 837: awkward sentence construction (too many parenthetical clauses
>
> joined by commas)
>
> ", if" to " and"
>
> 861: omitted article
>
> "Response" to "The Response"
>
> 866: typo
>
> "case ," to "case," -- there's an extra space between "case" and the
>
> comma
>
> 867: omitted article
>
> "without sequence" to "without a sequence"
>
> 872: consistent usage
>
> "from and to" to "@from and @to"
>
> 877: consistent usage
>
> "groupID attribute" to "@groupId attribute"
>
> 885: consistent usage
>
> "groupID attribute" to "@groupId attribute"
>
> 877: consistent usage, improper punctuation
>
> "groupId attribute," to "@groupId attribute" -- also remove a
>
> superfluous comma after "attribute".
>
> 895: consistent usage
>
> "groupId attribute" to "@groupId attribute"
>
> 917-918: typo
>
> 917 ends with "numb" and 918 begins "er", suggesting a space snuck into
>
> the word "number".
>
> 918: typo
>
> extra spaces between "15" and "for"
>
> 958: excess word
>
> "case of a" to "case a" -- omit "of"
>
> 958: Clumsy construction
>
> "In case of a Response RM-Reply Pattern was required, and when the
>
> message cannot"
>
> Better: "When a Response RM-Reply Pattern was required and the message
>
> cannot"
>
> 965: Clumsy construction
>
> "In case a Callback or Poll RM-Reply Pattern was required, and when the
>
> message"
>
> Better: "When a Callback or Poll RM-Reply Pattern was required and the
>
> message"
>
> 1938: typo
>
> change "conditions" to "contributions"
>
> Tom: All comments except the one on Line 629 was applied to editing 
> draft 1.01F. Full sentence is allowed to be introduced by Note: prefix 
> in specifications.
>
>
>       5.2.4 Tony Graham Comments
>
> · *Re: [wsrm] 1.1-1.02 editorial* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00042.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 8 Jun 2004 13:55:32 -0000
>
> Tom: Change applied to draft 1.01F
>
>
>   6 Discussion of Document Progression.
>
> Tentative Schedule:
>
> June 3 – Draft 1.01 posted by Iwasa
>
> June 7 – editorial changes required to be posted to list.
>
> June 8: Tom Rutt posted editing draft contribution 1.01F incorporating 
> editorial comments received
>
> June 8 – TC votes to approve CD at Teleconf, and also votes to submit 
> to OASIS member vote.
>
> June 15 – submission sent to OASIS Staff
>
>
>   7 Potential Vote for CD progression
>
> · *Groups - EditingDraft101F.pdf uploaded* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00044.html>
> /From/ tom@coastin.com on 8 Jun 2004 15:47:48 -0000
>
> Potential motion: xxx Moves to progress editing Draft 1.01F, along 
> with the four schemas posted by Sunil on 6/7/204, as WS-Reliability CD 
> 1.01.
>
>
>   8 Potential Vote for OASIS Submission for Member vote of CD
>
> If successful to progress to CD the following motion can be made:
>
> Potential motion: xxx moves to submit the CD 1.01 to OASIS staff 
> before June 15, for OASIS Member vote.
>
>
>   9 Frequently Asked Questions
>
> Tom posted the following:
>
> · *Approved FAQ set for WSRM TC* 
> <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00012.html>
> /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 3 Jun 2004 13:57:21 -0000
>
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