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Subject: Re: [wsrm] Full agenda for wsrm tc teleconf 6/8/04
Ignore the dates on the first few lines they are wrong Tom Rutt wrote: > The full agenda with links is attached. > > We have two potential votes scheduled for today's meeting. > > Tom Rutt > WSRM TC Chair > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > Full Agenda of WSRM TC Conference Call –May 25, 2004 > >The meeting of the WSRM TC will take place by teleconference > > Tuesday, June 1, 2004, from 5:30 to 7:30 PM Eastern Standard Time > > Conference Bridge number > Toll only : 1-512-225-3050 > Participant code: 716071 > > > 1 Draft Agenda: > > Draft Agenda to WSRM TC Conference Call > > 1 Roll Call > > 2 Minutes Discussion > > 2.1 Appointment of Minute Taker > > 2.2 Approval of previous meeting minutes – > > 3 Action Item Status Review > > 4 Discussions of unresolved editorial comments > > 5 Discussion of Document progression > > 6 Scheduled Vote for CD > > 7 Scheduled Vote to Submit to OASIS for member vote > > 6 Discussion of FAQ for WS-Reliability > > > 2 Roll Call > > Attendance: > > Meeting ?? quorate. > > > 3 Minutes Discussion > > > 3.1 Appointment of Minute Taker > > Tom Rutt will take minutes. > > Minutes will serve to record issue resolutions. > > > 3.2 Approval of previous meeting minutes > > The minutes of the June 01 teleconf are posted at: > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7101/MinutesWSRMTC060104.htm > <http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/6979/MinutesWSRM-052504.htm> > > > > 4 Status of Action Items > > · *Action Item status as of 6/3/04* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00014.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 3 Jun 2004 17:44:53 -0000 > > > 5 Discussion of Issues and editorial Comments > > The following issues list includes one open item which need further > discussion: > > · · *Updated public comments issues list posted* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00020.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 4 Jun 2004 00:45:00 -0000 > > > 5.1 Namespace for Schema, and location > > · *Re: [wsrm] Action Item status as of 6/3/04* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00023.html> > /From/ Sunil Kunisetty <sunil.kunisetty@oracle.com> on 4 Jun 2004 > 05:44:50 -0000 > > · *Groups - ws-reliability-1.1.xsd uploaded* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00038.html> > /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:06:11 -0000 > > · *Groups - reference-1.1.xsd uploaded* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00037.html> > /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:05:59 -0000 > > · *Groups - fnp-1.1.xsd uploaded* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00036.html> > /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:05:43 -0000 > > · *Groups - wsrmfp-1.1.xsd uploaded* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00035.html> > /From/ Sunil.Kunisetty@oracle.com on 7 Jun 2004 19:05:29 -0000 > > Tom: changes applied to 1.01F, all filenames have 1.1 in their name. > > > 5.2 Editorial comments on Draft 1.01 > > > 5.2.1 Tom Rutt Comments > > · *Detailed Editorial Fixes for Sections 1 - 4 of ED 1.01* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00026.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 5 Jun 2004 19:58:05 -0000 > > · *Editorial changes for Sections 5 onward to Draft 1.01* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00027.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 5 Jun 2004 21:05:46 -0000 > > Tom: All changes applied to editing drafts 1.01E and 1.01F > > > 5.2.2 Jacques Durand Comments > > · *Re: [wsrm] editorial comments on 101* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00041.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 8 Jun 2004 04:09:51 -0000 > > Changes applies to Editing draft 1.01F > > > 5.2.3 Mark Peel Comments > > Email from Mark Peel: > > Some proofreading corrections: the line numbers are from the 06-04 > > document. I didn't have time to proof the whole document. If you don't > > feel these are appropriate, I don't mind if you omit them. > > Mark Peel > > Web Services Infrastructure > > Novell, Inc. > > 134: Erroneous capitalization > > in Table 1, replace "E.g" with "e.g." > > 150: Typo > > appears to contain a doublespace after the comma > > 228: Improper usage (e.g. is used to join parenthetical material within > > a sentence) > > replace "E.g., The" with "For example, the" > > 244: Erroneous capitalization > > "For" should be "for" > > 344: omit needless word > > change "and to not support" into "and not support" -- omits "to", > > which adds nothing to meaning. > > 328: use a form consistent with definition > > "Group scope. All" to "Group scope: all" > > 328: use a form consistent with definition > > "Message scope. A" to "Message scope: a" > > 348: Confusing phrase > > ", that is a parameter affecting the entire group" -- I don't know > > what this clause means. Does it intend to explain why GroupExpiryTime > > can change dynamically? It doesn't do a good job of it. I suggest > > striking this clause and putting a period after GroupExpiryTime. > > 401: typo > > appears to contain a doublespace in "the resending" > > 498: Inconsistent capitalization > > change "Schema" to "schema" to conform to previous line. > > 498-499: Wordy sentence construction > > "If there are additional elements that are not described in this > > specification present in message," > > Better as "If a message contains additional elements not described in > > this specification," > > 546: Inconsistent capitalization > > "@GroupId" should change to "@groupId", making it consistent with the > > other attribute descriptions that follow. > > 606: typo > > "incremented of 1" should be "incremented by 1" > > 629: Erroneous capitalization > > "Note: Given" to "Note: given" > > 629-630: unclear sentence construction > > "in case Duplicate Elimination is required, when a received message is > > processed," > > Better "when a received message requiring Duplicate Elimination is > > processed," > > 673: Improper usage (e.g. is used to join parenthetical material within > > a sentence) > > "E.g., If" to "For example, if" > > 691: typo > > "things," to "things" -- there's no balancing comma to the one > > following "things" and we can omit it. > > 693: series not properly punctuated > > "element)" should really be "element)," -- but most written English > > seems to omit that comma these days, so I don't insist on adding it > > here. > > 759: omitted article > > "by reference-schema" to "by the reference-schema" -- adds back "the" > > into the sentence > > 764: omitted article > > "of ReplyTo" to "of the ReplyTo" > > 765: omitted article > > "with URI" to "with a value of type URI" > > 783: consistent usage > > "groupId attribute" to "@groupId attribute", a change required twice on > > this line. This is consistent with earlier sections describing > > attributes. > > 801: typo > > "ispecifies" to "specifies" > > 805: change passive voice to active voice, reduce wordy phrase > > "which is polling" to "asking" > > 837: change passive voice to active voice > > "is using" to "uses" > > 837: awkward sentence construction (too many parenthetical clauses > > joined by commas) > > ", if" to " and" > > 861: omitted article > > "Response" to "The Response" > > 866: typo > > "case ," to "case," -- there's an extra space between "case" and the > > comma > > 867: omitted article > > "without sequence" to "without a sequence" > > 872: consistent usage > > "from and to" to "@from and @to" > > 877: consistent usage > > "groupID attribute" to "@groupId attribute" > > 885: consistent usage > > "groupID attribute" to "@groupId attribute" > > 877: consistent usage, improper punctuation > > "groupId attribute," to "@groupId attribute" -- also remove a > > superfluous comma after "attribute". > > 895: consistent usage > > "groupId attribute" to "@groupId attribute" > > 917-918: typo > > 917 ends with "numb" and 918 begins "er", suggesting a space snuck into > > the word "number". > > 918: typo > > extra spaces between "15" and "for" > > 958: excess word > > "case of a" to "case a" -- omit "of" > > 958: Clumsy construction > > "In case of a Response RM-Reply Pattern was required, and when the > > message cannot" > > Better: "When a Response RM-Reply Pattern was required and the message > > cannot" > > 965: Clumsy construction > > "In case a Callback or Poll RM-Reply Pattern was required, and when the > > message" > > Better: "When a Callback or Poll RM-Reply Pattern was required and the > > message" > > 1938: typo > > change "conditions" to "contributions" > > Tom: All comments except the one on Line 629 was applied to editing > draft 1.01F. Full sentence is allowed to be introduced by Note: prefix > in specifications. > > > 5.2.4 Tony Graham Comments > > · *Re: [wsrm] 1.1-1.02 editorial* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00042.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 8 Jun 2004 13:55:32 -0000 > > Tom: Change applied to draft 1.01F > > > 6 Discussion of Document Progression. > > Tentative Schedule: > > June 3 – Draft 1.01 posted by Iwasa > > June 7 – editorial changes required to be posted to list. > > June 8: Tom Rutt posted editing draft contribution 1.01F incorporating > editorial comments received > > June 8 – TC votes to approve CD at Teleconf, and also votes to submit > to OASIS member vote. > > June 15 – submission sent to OASIS Staff > > > 7 Potential Vote for CD progression > > · *Groups - EditingDraft101F.pdf uploaded* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00044.html> > /From/ tom@coastin.com on 8 Jun 2004 15:47:48 -0000 > > Potential motion: xxx Moves to progress editing Draft 1.01F, along > with the four schemas posted by Sunil on 6/7/204, as WS-Reliability CD > 1.01. > > > 8 Potential Vote for OASIS Submission for Member vote of CD > > If successful to progress to CD the following motion can be made: > > Potential motion: xxx moves to submit the CD 1.01 to OASIS staff > before June 15, for OASIS Member vote. > > > 9 Frequently Asked Questions > > Tom posted the following: > > · *Approved FAQ set for WSRM TC* > <http://www.oasis-open.org/archives/wsrm/200406/msg00012.html> > /From/ Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com> on 3 Jun 2004 13:57:21 -0000 > >------------------------------------------------------------------------ > >To unsubscribe from this mailing list (and be removed from the roster of the OASIS TC), go to http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/members/leave_workgroup.php. > -- ---------------------------------------------------- Tom Rutt email: tom@coastin.com; trutt@us.fujitsu.com Tel: +1 732 801 5744 Fax: +1 732 774 5133
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