FW: Re: [wsrm] Edting Draft 1.01F posted as contribution

[Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>]

I made the updates described below and posted as Contribution 1.01G.
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/7153/Contribution-EditingDraft101G.sxw

--Pete

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Date: Tue, 08 Jun 2004 17:18:19 -0400
From: Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com>
To: Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
Subject: Re: [wsrm] Edting Draft 1.01F posted as contribution

Pete, can you update the open office file 1.01F yourself to do these 
fixes, and post it as a contribution
in the next few minutes?

Tom Rutt

Pete Wenzel wrote:

>Tom, here are a couple more small edits (line numbers against 1.01F):
>
>19-22: Replace comment instructions (see attached email).
>Bottom Margin: Remove center tab-stop and extra tab from first line of
> footer; then the date will be right-justified properly, rather than
> on a new line.
>29+: Table of Contents page numbering is off; remember to update it
> after switching change-tracking display on or off each time.
>17: Figure 6 is out of alignment; double click on the
> wsrm:SequenceReplies and wsrm:ReplyRange frames to bring up
> properties, then "ok", and they will snap back to the right size.
> Move cardinality legend up a few lines so it all stays on the same
> page and eliminates the following blank page.  Maybe link together
> all the individual frames to lock everything in place?
>240, 1233: Duplicate period.
>
>--Pete
>Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
>Senior Architect, SeeBeyond
>Standards & Product Strategy
>+1-626-471-6311 (US-Pacific)
> 
>
>
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>
>Subject:
>Re: [wsrm] Groups - WS-Reliability-2004-05-26.pdf uploaded
>From:
>Pete Wenzel <pete@seebeyond.com>
>Date:
>Tue, 1 Jun 2004 15:48:39 -0700
>To:
>wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org
>
>To:
>wsrm@lists.oasis-open.org
>
>
>I agreed to locate boilerplate text that describes the new OASIS
>comment procedure.  The OpenOffice samples
>
>http://www.oasis-open.org/spectools/docs/spectools-openoffice-sample-draft-03.sxw
>http://www.oasis-open.org/spectools/docs/spectools-openoffice-sample-draft-03.pdf
>
>are the most recently updated documents in the SpecTools section,
>and indicate that the two sentences that begin "Others should ..."
>(at lines 19-22 of WS-Reliability 0.999) should be replaced with:
>
> Others should use the comment form at
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/form.php?wg_abbrev=wsrm.
>
>[Note that the final period is not part of the URL.]
>

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