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Subject: Non-exhaustive proofreading pass on 1.05 spec
I've grouped these suggestions into categories; you can take or leave any of them. None of them should change the meaning of the spec in any way. I've structured each suggestion in a 3 line format. The first line lists the line number, followed by a description of the change; the second line lists the current reading of the spec; the third my revised wording. Mark Peel Web Services Infrastructure Novell, Inc. Typos: 264 -- change "A" to lower case (e.g., A transport connection) (e.g., a transport connection) 297 -- capitalize "way" One-way One-Way 982 -- change "D" in "groupID" to lower case @groupID @groupId 990 -- change "D" in "groupID" to lower case @groupID @groupId 1303 -- capitalize "way" One-way One-Way 1316 (Table 26) -- capitalize "way" One-way One-Way Formatting: 1022-1023 -- eliminate line break separating "numb" from "er" (a backslash stands for the line break in illustrations) sequence numb\er 15 sequence number \15 Omissions: 105 -- insert omitted space between "Processor" and "(RMP)"; make "Reliable Message Processor" and "RMP" plural the two Reliable Messaging Processor(RMP) they use. the two Reliable Messaging Processors (RMPs) they use. 216 -- insert omitted comma between "is" and "either" Reliable Message, that is either an Reliable Message, that is, either an 752 -- insert dash after "Poll" to close parenthetical material RM-Reply Patterns -- Response, Callback and Poll are RM-Reply Patterns -- Response, Callback and Poll -- are Form: 253 -- Omit "The", capitalize "four", and enclose "Submit, Deliver, Respond and Notify" in parenthesis The four operations Submit, Deliver, Respond and Notify are used Four operations (Submit, Deliver, Respond and Notify) are used Grammar/punctuation: 146 -- change "expressed" to "expressing them" (avoids the switch of sentence subject) features, expressed as features, expressing them as 262-263 -- move "or not" from after "matched" to after "whether" knowledge of whether an invocation of Deliver will be matched or not by knowledge of whether or not an invocation of Deliver will be matched by 1003-1005 -- move "either" before "are"; use parenthesis to enclose the 2 parenthetical clauses instead of dashes referred to are either acknowledged - in which case @fault MUST NOT be present - or have encountered a particular,common fault condition - in which case @fault MUST be present. referred to either are acknowledged (in which case @fault MUST NOT be present) or have encountered a particular,common fault condition (in which case @fault MUST be present).
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