Re: [wsrm] Groups - ws-Reliability Candidate CD 1.1.1-diff-R1(ws_reliability--CandidateCD-1-1-1-diff-R1.odt) modified

[Tom Rutt <tom@coastin.com>]

iwasa wrote:
> I have some comments to the draft so far.
> Most are editorial comments, but there may be
> some technical issues.
>
> 1. footer should have correct version number.
>         Currently, it is 1.1.0.1
>         It should be 1.1.1
>   
I fixed this in candidate cd 1
> 2. Copyright should cover 2006.
>         Currently it is "copyright 2003-2004"
>         It should be "copyright 2003-2006"
>   
fixed this in candidate cd1
> 3. errota location should be under appropriate folder
>         Currently :
> http://www.oasisopen.org/committees/wsrm/documents/errata/1.1/index.html
>         It should be:
> http://www.oasisopen.org/committees/wsrm/documents/errata/1.1.1/index.html
>
>   
since this is a cd there would not need to be an erratta, we could just 
vote on a new cd with fixes.
errata are for informative fixes to oasis standards.
> 4. Question: Is it TC decision to remove all the previous editors
>     for the spec with minor updates? I don't believe so.
>     I feel it looks like not appropriate.
>
>   
I fisxed this on candidate CD for ballot
> 5. I think we need to update or add additional bindings in
>     HTTP binding section. I need to check further.
>   
I think the response reliabiliy uses existing http bindings (if you 
include some piggybacking).

Tom
> Regards,
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> Iwasa
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> Subject: [wsrm] Groups - ws-Reliability Candidate CD 1.1.1-diff-R1
> (ws_reliability--CandidateCD-1-1-1-diff-R1.odt) modified
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>> Information about the document named ws-Reliability Candidate CD
>> 1.1.1-diff-R1 (ws_reliability--CandidateCD-1-1-1-diff-R1.odt) has been
>> modified by Mr Tom Rutt.
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>> Document Description:
>> Open office source doc for ws-reliability candidate cd 1.1.1, showing
>> changes
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>> R1 includes the changed "delivery failure" to "delivery failue
>> notification" in 3.2.1.2
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>> View Document Details:
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> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/document.php?document_id=20514
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>> Download Document:
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> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrm/download.php/20514/ws_reliability--CandidateCD-1-1-1-diff-R1.odt
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