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Comment from: antranig@caret.cam.ac.uk

p.12 line 10. This is unclear - what precisely is meant by the "persistent state of registration" in this context?
p.13 line 31. "At this point" - should be made clear that the point is intermediate to the scenario.
p.15 Figure 2 - many items which are properly one word such as "GetServiceDescription" have been split up in diagram, and following.
p.25 line 21 - "or honored" should read "are honored" or "have been honored"
p.29 line 24 - wsrp;view should have colon rather than semicolon
p.38 line 17 - should read "getPortletProperties"
p.52 line 7 - either "declare extensions in A" or "declare extensions in namespaces"


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