RE: [wsrp-interop] XML 2003 demo abstract

[Andre Kramer <andre.kramer@eu.citrix.com>]

Could we change "portal vendors" to "TC collaborators", please? I don't mind use of "Portal" elsewhere in the text, and I'm certainly not a marketing person, but I do know that we are more than just a portal vendor ;-)

 

Other comments (all minor):

 

"semantic of that interface" sounds overly complex. How about "protocol" - i.e. in the old diplomatic meaning?

 

two uses of "quickly" - change first to simplify access?

 

"thereby by gain".

 

"generic code" - generic means / without programming

 

"the consumption" - markup & display?

 

regards,

Andre

-----Original Message-----
From: Rich Thompson [mailto:richt2@us.ibm.com]
Sent: 22 September 2003 13:45
To: wsrp-interop@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [wsrp-interop] XML 2003 demo abstract

Here is a draft for the abstract for our planned demo. Any comments and suggestions would be appreciated. Deadline for submission is 29 September ...



Rich