Re: [wsrp-pfb] UDDI tech note draft-08

[Rich Thompson <richt2@us.ibm.com>]

Attached are my comments and suggested
changes. Almost entirely typos and grammar. This work is looking quite
good, gentlemen!



Rich

Richard Jacob <richard.jacob@de.ibm.com>

07/08/2004 11:03 AM

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Subject	[wsrp-pfb] UDDI tech note draft-08

Hi all,

I just post these to the list for now for a final SC review.
As discussed please review the TN and let me know of intended changes.
I espacially added the appendix A-E, added clarification on Portlet
publishing (tModelKey redundancy in case of UDDI V3, Producer service
reference) and revised the suggested editorial changes.
Would be great if you could finish your review by end of monday (no matter
what timezone :-) ).
After that we can enter TC review.

(See attached file: wsrp-pfb-uddi-tn-draft-08.doc)(See attached file:
wsrp-pfb-uddi-tn-draft-08.pdf)

Mit freundlichen Gruessen / best regards,

        Richard Jacob
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