Re: [wsrp-primer] Primer Draft uploaded

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

I will go over this, and get back with any responses, plus my updates 
to date on my section before Thursday's meeting.

Ciao,
Rex

At 4:36 PM -0600 4/11/04, Subbu Allamaraju wrote:
>I've just uploaded the next draft of the Primer 
>(http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsrp-primer/download.php/6333/wsrp-primer-1.0-draft-0.5.doc). 
>This draft includes the following:
>
>a. Hand-written comments from Rich. I could not include these in the 
>previous draft.
>
>b. Rewrites to sections 1-5 based on the comments made during F2F.
>
>c. Updated messages and diagrams for Section 5. Rex - please holler 
>if there are any omissions.
>
>Except for style/formatting changes, all other changes are in 
>change-tracking mode.
>
>Regards,
>
>Subbu


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