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Subject: RE: [wsrp-wsia] Revised section 1.3.5.1
Hello, These look good. We might want to repeat the diagrams in the main body of the specification to help provide continuity. For example, in Section 5.4 on deregister repeat the administration sequence diagram. The entire diagram can be repeated with everything except deregister grayed out. Or, just the immediate part of the diagram around deregister could be repeated. It is easier when you can use mouse-over, linking and other tricks to help with this kind of thing. Printed documents are a bit more restrictive. Take care. Joe Rudnicki -----Original Message----- From: Rich Thompson [mailto:richt2@us.ibm.com] Sent: Monday, October 14, 2002 6:54 AM To: wsrp-wsia@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: [wsrp-wsia] Revised section 1.3.5.1 With several people indicating that a reworked section on the interaction of various actors at different levels of sophistication (i.e. section 1.3.5) that used more graphical techniques might be useful, Alan spent some time drawing these figures. We would like feedback on two levels (& hence are distributing just a revised 1.3.5.1 section): 1) Is this headed in a direction that our readers are likely to find easier to understand? 2) If #1 is 'yes', comments that would further clarify these figures/text. (See attached file: trial section 1.3.5.1.doc)
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