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Subject: [wsrp-wsia] [change request #55] portletInstanceKey grammar
Document: Spec Section: 6.1.1 Page/Line: 30/31 Requested by: Michael Freedman Old text: ... Consumer MAY supply as a reference to this use of the Portlet. Proposed text: ... Consumer MAY supply as a reference to its use of this Portlet. Reasoning: I found the first sentence confusing. I had trouble understanding whether this applied to the Consumer vs. the Portlet. I should probably take a grammar class -- but instead suggest replacing with "its" to make this clear.
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