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Subject: Editorial comments on WSS 1.1 SAML Token Profile

From: "Martin Gudgin" <mgudgin@microsoft.com>
To: <wss-comment@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date: Wed, 10 Aug 2005 04:41:02 -0700

Here are some editorial comments on WSS 1.1 SAML Token Profile CD
doc[1]. 

Gudge

[1]
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/13405/wss-v1.1-spec-pr
-SAMLTokenProfile-01.pdf


1.	Line 52 - s/does/must

2.	Line 341 - s/<wsse:EncodedString>/wsse:EncodedString

3.	Line 358 - s/xsi:string/xs:string

4.	Line 357 - <saml:AuthorityBinding> should be in Courier font.

5.	Line 358 - <wsse:SecurityTokenReference> should be in Courier
font.

6.	Line 363 - s/<wsu:Id>/wsu:Id

8.	Line 685, 690, 878 - should 'canonicalization' be in normal
font?