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Subject: Editorial comments on WSS 1.1 Kerberos Token Profile

From: "Martin Gudgin" <mgudgin@microsoft.com>
To: <wss-comment@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date: Wed, 10 Aug 2005 04:41:07 -0700

Here are some editorial comments on WSS 1.1 Kerberos Token Profile CD
doc[1]. 

Gudge

[1]
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/13390/wss-v1.1-spec-pr
-KerberosTokenProfile-01.pdf


1.	Line 55 - s/does not/must not

2.	Line 156 - s/serves/serve

3.	Line 157 - s/token/tokens

4.	Line 162 - s/the either the/either the

5.	Line 163 - s/algorithm/encoding

6.	Line 203 - s/AP_REQ, encoded/AP_REQ, as appropriate, encoded

7.	Line 297 - s/wrapped AP_REQ used/wrapped AP_REQ be used