[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: Re: [wss] Comments on oasis-0005-wss-username-token-profile-1[1].0.pdf
Hello, At Thu, 11 Dec 2003 11:25:12 -0800, Blake Dournaee wrote: > 2. Line 117: The term 'providers' is used to describe a web service > provider, yet in line 119, they are called 'producers.' Should we use > consistent terminology here? In section "1 Introduction", the words "web service consumer" and "web service producer" are used. It is better to use same terminology. Here are another editorial comments: 1. ":" should be used in the spec name (?) Line 45 Web Services Security (WSS) SOAP Message Security Line 61 WSS: SOAP Message Security Line 85 WSS-SOAP Message Security Line 243 WSS: SOAP Message Security Line 272 WSS SOAP Message Security Line 2-3 Web Services Security UsernameToken Profile 1.0 2. Terminology "Username Token" When we imply the element, "<wsse:UsernameToken>" should be used. But when we use it as a common noun, which should we use? - UsernameToken - username Token - Username Token Line 15 UsernameToken Line 45 UsernameToken Line 102 Username token Line 120 UsernameToken Line 124 UsernameTokens Line 146 username Line 233 Username Token Line 236 Username Token Line 237 UsernameToken Line 238 username Token Line 239 UsernameToken Line 249 <UsernameToken> Line 266 UsernameToken Line 271 Username token (Line 267 SecurityTokens) 3. Attribute values are enclosed in "<" and ">". Line 96 "<wsse:PasswordDigest>" Line 129 "<wsse:PasswordText> or <wsse:PasswordDigest>" Line 234 "<wsse:UsernameToken>" 4. Line 135-136 Unnecessary newline (new paragraph) 5. Line 146, 148, 150 Should these paragraphs be indented? 6. Line 177 "Nonce element" should be "<wsse:Nonce> element" or just "nonce" 7. Line 193-206 Though the namespace declaration uses "S11", <Envelope> and <Header> elements have "S:" prefix. 8. Line 242 "may" --> "MAY" ? 9. Line 251 "in the Web Services Security: Username Token Profile Document." Is it better to use "this document" or "this specification"? --- NISHIMURA Toshihiro (FAMILY Given) nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com XML/Web Services Technology Dept., STRATEGY AND TECHNOLOGY DIV., FUJITSU LIMITED
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]