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Subject: Re: [wss] Comments on oasis-0005-wss-username-token-profile-1[1].0.pdf
Hello, I checked the newly posted document (with same name). At Thu, 11 Dec 2003 22:21:14 -0600, Anthony Nadalin wrote: > (1) Done, chose WSS: SOAP Message Security How about Line 2 (the title of this document)? Doesn't it need ":"? > (2) Done, chose Username Token It seems that you chose "UsernameToken". And it came to me that the title uses "UsernameToken" and the document footer uses "Username Token". > (3) Done > (4) PDF Problem > (5) Done > (6) Done > (7) Done (7) is not corrected. Sitll using "S:" at Line 196, 198, 207, 209, 214, 216, 231 and 233. And at Line 211, I found: "an creation timestamp" --> "a creation timestamp" > (8) Done (8) is not corrected. Line 245. > (9) Done > > Subject: Re: [wss] Comments on > oasis-0005-wss-username-token-profile-1[1].0.pdf > From: NISHIMURA Toshihiro <nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com> > To: wss@lists.oasis-open.org > Date: Fri, 12 Dec 2003 10:56:19 +0900 > > Hello, > > At Thu, 11 Dec 2003 11:25:12 -0800, > Blake Dournaee wrote: > > 2. Line 117: The term 'providers' is used to describe a web > service > > provider, yet in line 119, they are called 'producers.' Should we use > > consistent terminology here? > > In section "1 Introduction", the words "web service consumer" and > "web service" are used. It is better to use same terminology. > > > Here are another editorial comments: > > 1. ":" should be used in the spec name (?) > Line 45 Web Services Security (WSS) SOAP Message Security > Line 61 WSS: SOAP Message Security > Line 85 WSS-SOAP Message Security > Line 243 WSS: SOAP Message Security > Line 272 WSS SOAP Message Security > Line 2-3 Web Services Security UsernameToken Profile 1.0 > > 2. Terminology "Username Token" > When we imply the element, "<wsse:UsernameToken>" should be used. > But when we use it as a common noun, which should we use? > - UsernameToken > - username Token > - Username Token > > Line 15 UsernameToken > Line 45 UsernameToken > Line 102 Username token > Line 120 UsernameToken > Line 124 UsernameTokens > Line 146 username > Line 233 Username Token > Line 236 Username Token > Line 237 UsernameToken > Line 238 username Token > Line 239 UsernameToken > Line 249 <UsernameToken> > Line 266 UsernameToken > Line 271 Username token > (Line 267 SecurityTokens) > > 3. Attribute values are enclosed in "<" and ">". > Line 96 "<wsse:PasswordDigest>" > Line 129 "<wsse:PasswordText> or <wsse:PasswordDigest>" > Line 234 "<wsse:UsernameToken>" > > 4. Line 135-136 Unnecessary newline (new paragraph) > > 5. Line 146, 148, 150 > Should these paragraphs be indented? > > 6. Line 177 > "Nonce element" should be "<wsse:Nonce> element" or just "nonce" > > 7. Line 193-206 > Though the namespace declaration uses "S11", <Envelope> and <Header> > elements have "S:" prefix. > > 8. Line 242 "may" --> "MAY" ? > > 9. Line 251 "in the Web Services Security: Username Token Profile > Document." > Is it better to use "this document" or "this specification"? > > --- > NISHIMURA Toshihiro (FAMILY Given) > nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com > XML/Web Services Technology Dept., > STRATEGY AND TECHNOLOGY DIV., FUJITSU LIMITED > > Anthony Nadalin | work 512.436.9568 | cell 512.289.4122 > [2 <text/html; US-ASCII (7bit)>] > --- NISHIMURA Toshihiro (FAMILY Given) nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com XML/Web Services Technology Dept., STRATEGY AND TECHNOLOGY DIV., FUJITSU LIMITED
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