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Subject: Comments on WSS-SOAPMessageSecurity-122903-merged.pdf
Hi, One question before editorial comments. Have we discussed about the URI for STR Dereference Transform? Currently, schemas.xmlsoap.org namespace is used: http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/2003/06/STR-Transform Here are editorial comments on WSS-SOAPMessageSecurity-122903-merged.pdf. - Line 107 "WSS-SOAP Message Security" -> "WSS: SOAP Message Security" - Line 161 "this specification uses the notational convention of WSS: SOAP Message Security." "this specification" is "WSS: SOAP Message Security". It refers itself. - Line 166 Missing period ("."). - Lines 167-171 states almost same thing with Line 182-185, but mentions different SOAP version for detailed example. - Line 192 (table) SHA-1 -> SHA or Secure Hash Algorithm -> Secure Hash Algorithm 1 - Line 194 "The following (non-normative) table defines acronyms and abbreviations for this document." Unnecessary line. (2.4 is Terminology section, not Acronyms section.) - Line 218 wth -> with - Line 337 Missing Period (".") at the end of this line. - Line 340 "Lines (008) to (035)" -> "Lines (008) to (023)" - Line 354 Why "body" is in italic font? - Line 369 Unnecessary bullet. - Line 422 Why 'in the form of a' is quoted? - Lines 458-468 S:role is explained here but S:mustUnderstand is not. - Line 476 "<wsse: Security>" (whitespace) - Lines 477, 481 "must" should be "MUST" ? - Line 573 "URIe" -> "URI" - Line 614 "SecurityTokenReference" -> "<wsse:SecurityTokenReference>" - Line 619 "SecurityTokenReference" -> "<wsse:SecurityTokenReference> element" "<Security>" -> "<wsse:Security>" - Line 634 "<Reference>" -> "<wsse:Reference>" "<SecurityTokenReference>" -> "<wsse:SecurityTokenReference>" - Line 637 "<SecurityToken>" -> "security token" (?) - Line 708 "ds:KeyName" -> "<ds:KeyName>" (?) - Line 812 uses "Message provider" and Line 813 uses "producer of the message" - Line 868-869 "The fundamental difference .... is which namespace declarations which are placed in the output." The first "which" should be "the" ? - Lines 940, 945, 946, 949, 951, 953 "<SecurityTokenReference>" -> "<wsse:SecurityTokenReference>" - Lines 962, 963, 965, 966, 976, 978, 979, 980, 981, 982 Add "ds:" prefix to the elements - Line 990 "Transform Output:" This line should not be bulleted. - Line 998 mentions about wsse:CanonicalizationParameters element. I think <wsse:TransformationParameters> element is correct. --- NISHIMURA Toshihiro (FAMILY Given) nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com XML/Web Services Technology Dept., STRATEGY AND TECHNOLOGY DIV., FUJITSU LIMITED
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