Soap message security errata 1.0 comments

[<Frederick.Hirsch@nokia.com>]

 Some comments and corrections to the SOAP Message Security 1.0 errata

General comments
1.  Might be useful to number the errata items in each section
2. Highlight replaced and replacing text, via font and/or quotes
3. To provide version of document with errata comments executed with
change bars, would be useful.
3. Where ... Is used in spec for URLS (e.g. ...#Base64Binary) it might
be clearer to spell out the full URL. Also in the errata.
4. Include URL of pdf document errata refers to in errata document.
Suggest changing "Document Location" to "Errata Document Location" at
line 9, to allow additional header "Document Location" to be added,
providing URL for corrected document

Specific comments on errata, by errata line number
5 Line 78: replace 734 with 634 for line number
6 Lines 83-85, effectively changing SHALL to a MUST when used ?
7 Line 87-88: What is the line number for this change? It isn't clear
from the errata the change that is planned.
8 Line 94: Change 683 to 863
9 Line 116
Two comments - isn't wsu:ID a unique identifier, intended as an Id that
isn't necessarily referenced from within the same XML document? Not sure
"string label" captures this
- How does wsu:ID provide an open attribute model? Isn't that what @any
does?

10 Line 129: replace 1382 with 1392

11 Line 144, 145 - delete, it isn't part of the replacement

Regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia


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