RE: [wss] WSS spec legibility

["Granqvist, Hans" <hgranqvist@verisign.com>]

Hi Paul

See the 1.0 offical spec and the latest 1.1 draft

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wss/download.php/11535/oasis-20
04xx-wss-soap-message-security-1.1-changes.pdf


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Cotton [mailto:pcotton@microsoft.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, March 02, 2005 10:41 AM
> To: Granqvist, Hans; wss@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [wss] WSS spec legibility
> 
> 
> Can you please give a URL for the exact version of the 
> document you are commenting on?
> 
> /paulc
> 
> Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada 
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> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Granqvist, Hans [mailto:hgranqvist@verisign.com]
> > Sent: March 2, 2005 1:17 PM
> > To: 'wss@lists.oasis-open.org'
> > Subject: [wss] WSS spec legibility
> > 
> > Hi all,
> > 
> > The WSS spec is not trivial to read and understand, but it seems it 
> > has been made a bit harder to read than is necessary.
> > 
> > Two things in particular: Too little whitespace between paragraphs, 
> > and inconsistent use of bullet lists.
> > 
> > To see what I mean: Look at sections before and after "8.2 Signing 
> > Messages" for an example of the whitespace issue. The 
> blocks of text 
> > are typographically hard to read.
> > 
> > See sections "9.3.1 Encryption" and "9.3.2 Decryption" 
> (sections 9.4.1 
> > and 9.4.2 in latest 1.1 draft) for some inconsistency in 
> bullet list 
> > use.
> > 
> > It'd be great if we could fix at least the whitespace 
> problem for the 
> > next draft.
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > Hans
> > 
> > 
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