Editorial comments on UsernameToken 1.1

["Paul Cotton" <pcotton@microsoft.com>]

I have the following editorial comments on the UsernameToken 1.1
document:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wss/download.php/12306/oasi
s-
2004xx-wss-username-token-profile-1.1-changes.pdf

/paulc

1. Section 2.2 Namespaces and Section 6 References

a) References to RFC2396 [URI]

RFC2396 has been superceded by RFC 3986 in January 2005.  We should
refer to the new RFC:
http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt 

2. Section 6 References

a) [SOAP12] W3C Working Draft, "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging
Framework", 26 June 2002.

This should be changed to:

[SOAP12] W3C Recommendation, "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging
Framework", 
23 June 2003.

b) [URI] T. Berners-Lee, R. Fielding, L. Masinter, "Uniform Resource
Identifiers  (URI): Generic Syntax," RFC 2396, MIT/LCS, U.C. Irvine,
Xerox
Corporation, August 1998.

This should be changed to:

[URI] T. Berners-Lee, R. Fielding, L. Masinter, "Uniform Resource
Identifiers (URI): Generic Syntax," RFC 3986, MIT/LCS, Day Software,
Adobe Systems, January 2005.

c) [XML-Encrypt] W3C Working Draft, "XML Encryption Syntax and
Processing," 04 March 2002

should be changed to:

[XML-Encrypt] W3C Recommendation, "XML Encryption Syntax and
Processing," 10 December 2002 

d) [XPointer] "XML Pointer Language (XPointer) Version 1.0, Candidate
434
Recommendation", DeRose, Maler, Daniel, 11 September 2001.

I would delete this reference since it is NEVER used in the Userame
Token spec.

/* end of comments */

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