More comments on cd-1 core-spec

[Ludwig Seitz <ludwig@axiomatics.com>]

Hello all,

here are more observations on cd-1 core-spec.
Nothing fundamental again, just 'nits-to-pick'.

/Ludwig

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page 13 reference [XACMLAdmin] "... FIXME URL"
should be fixed ;-)

page 26, section 4.1.1 Example policy, line [a6],
and page 28, line [b4], 
and page 29, line [c2], 
and page 30, line [e4],
and page 37, line [h6]
"...xacml/FIXME.xsd" should be fixed.

page 26, section 4.1.1 Example policy, lines [a30-32], 
and page 32, lines [f17-20],
and page 33, lines [f45-48], [f56-59], [f70-73],
and page 35, lines [g20-23], [g56-59], [g67-70],
and page 36, lines [g80-83], [g93-96],
and page 37, lines [h25-28],
and page 38, lines [h47-50], [h62-65], [h76-79], [h88-91],
and page 40, lines [i28-31], [i41-44]
and page 41, lines [i52-55], [i65-68], [i76-79],
and page 42, lines [j19-22]
The AttributeDesignators are missing the mandatory xml-attribute
"MustBePresent".

page 27, lines 996-997  "The version attribute is omitted, ..."
It is not omitted, this sentence should be replaced with a description
of the version attribute.

page 28, lines [b2-4], 
and page 30, lines [e2-4].
The mandatory xml-attribute "ReturnPolicyIdList" is missing.

page 28, lines [b7], [b16], [b23],
and page 30, lines [e7-8], 
and page 31, lines [e12-13], [e19-20], [e37], [e43], [e50].
The attributes in the example requests are missing the mandatory
xml-attribute "IncludeInResult".

page 32, lines [f2-f8], 
and page 42, lines [j30-33]
The mandatory xml-attribute "Version" is missing

page 49, line 2184 the URI for XPath 1.0 should be 
http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xpath-19991116 not
http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/Rec-xpath-19991116



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