Kim,
I don't know what went wrong, but you have been reviewing the wrong
version. It is CD-03 which has been (or should have been) submitted to
public review and I believe these issues (or at least most of them)
have been already fixed.
Best regards,
Erik
On 2010-04-27 15:10, Kim Goolsby wrote:
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http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37055/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.doc
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37077/xacml-3%200-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.pdf
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37054/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.htm
As
I check this spec for QC, I've noted the following changes that need to
be made:
- The
specification title, 'profile' should be initial cap.
- The
stage should be initial cap.
- The
HTML as created out of Word cannot be uploaded by itself; any images or
other external resources will be lost. When saving as HTML Word creates
both an html file and a folder that contains these resources. The
resulting set must be uploaded as a zip into Kavi in order to be
complete.
- This
Version link has changed directories from the original CD01 upload. The
directory location must remain the same. In addition, pdf and html
files must be listed. Please designate one file as 'Authoritative'.
- Previous
version: the link is not in the proper location of the CD01 files. In
addition, pdf and html files must be listed.
- The
Latest Version URIs are incorrect and do not correspond to the CD01
files.
- Related
work: this should be hypertext linked to the actual specification
referenced.
- Status
links, which were correct in CD01, are once again broken.
- Notices,
last paragraph, please remove bracketed section, which reads ' [insert
specific trademarked names and abbreviations here] & need to link
OASIS to its homepage]'.
- OASIS
references, which were correct in CD01, are improperly formatted.
- Please
either remove extraneous links to XACMLIntro or provide full citation
information for each.
I'm
happy to answer any questions you might have about these changes.
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