This
request is for IPC. Erik is not the editor.
Hal
Hi
Eric,
Unfortunately that's not what was submitted; Hal's request
dated 22 April is incorporated below.
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Subject: XACML TC - Request for Second Public
Review
Date: April 22, 2010 10:40:56 AM EDT
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Mary P McRae
Director, Standards Development
Technical Committee Administrator
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
twitter: @fiberartisan #oasisopen
phone: 1.603.232.9090
Standards are like parachutes: they work best when they're
open.
On Apr 27, 2010, at 9:29 PM, Erik Rissanen wrote:
Kim, I don't know what went
wrong, but you have been reviewing the wrong version. It is CD-03 which has
been (or should have been) submitted to public review and I believe these
issues (or at least most of them) have been already fixed. Best
regards, Erik On 2010-04-27 15:10, Kim Goolsby wrote:
q2xa6e7df841004271210x9e112029p8e9fc6bd3c956728@mail.gmail.com
type="cite">
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37055/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.doc http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37077/xacml-3%200-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.pdf http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37054/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.htm
As
I check this spec for QC, I've noted the following changes that
need to be made:
- The
specification title, 'profile' should be initial
cap.
- The stage should
be initial cap.
- The HTML as
created out of Word cannot be uploaded by itself; any images or other
external resources will be lost. When saving as HTML Word creates both
an html file and a folder that contains these resources. The resulting
set must be uploaded as a zip into Kavi in order to be
complete.
- This Version
link has changed directories from the original CD01 upload. The
directory location must remain the same. In addition, pdf and html files
must be listed. Please designate one file as
'Authoritative'.
- Previous
version: the link is not in the proper location of the CD01 files. In
addition, pdf and html files must be
listed.
- The Latest
Version URIs are incorrect and do not correspond to the CD01
files.
- Related work:
this should be hypertext linked to the actual specification
referenced.
- Status links,
which were correct in CD01, are once again
broken.
- Notices, last
paragraph, please remove bracketed section, which reads ' [insert
specific trademarked names and abbreviations here] & need to link
OASIS to its homepage]'.
- OASIS
references, which were correct in CD01, are improperly
formatted.
- Please either
remove extraneous links to XACMLIntro or provide full citation
information for each.
I'm happy
to answer any questions you might have about these
changes.
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