RE: [xacml] Groups - IPC WD-07 uploaded

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John,

 

 

From: xacml@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:xacml@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of John Tolbert

Sent: Friday, January 13, 2012 11:24 PM

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Subject: [xacml] Groups - IPC WD-07 uploaded

 

115 Organizational-Relationship

The organizational relationship of the subject’s organization (identified by the organizational-affiliation attribute) to the organization that owns the IP resource.  Examples include “employee” and “contractor”.

 

I understand the first sentence to mean that we’re talking about a relationship between two organizations. If that is correct, then how can “employee” be an example of that?

 

 

192 From Figure 1, the questions arise: which of people A-E can see which of documents 1-5?  The goal fo this profile

 

Typo: “fo” à “of”

 

 

311 A common scheme such as DUNS SHOULD be used to promote interoperability.  Whichever range of values is chosen, it should coincide with the range of IP-Owner and IP-Designee.

 

The comment about DUNS should also be added to the sections on IP-Owner and IP-Designee.

 

 

608 FunctionId="urn:oasis:names:tc:xacml:1.0:function:date-less-than-or-equal">

 

The function should be date-less-than, since Expiration-Date was defined on line 299 to be the first date for which the agreement no longer holds.

 

Same for line 802 and 1024.

 

 

Thanks,

Ray