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Subject: RE: [xacml] Groups - IPC WD-07 uploaded
From: email@example.com [mailto:firstname.lastname@example.org] On Behalf Of John Tolbert
Sent: Friday, January 13, 2012 11:24 PM
Subject: [xacml] Groups - IPC WD-07 uploaded
The organizational relationship of the subject’s organization (identified by the organizational-affiliation attribute) to the organization that owns the IP resource. Examples include “employee” and “contractor”.
I understand the first sentence to mean that we’re talking about a relationship between two organizations. If that is correct, then how can “employee” be an example of that?
192 From Figure 1, the questions arise: which of people A-E can see which of documents 1-5? The goal fo this profile
Typo: “fo” à “of”
311 A common scheme such as DUNS SHOULD be used to promote interoperability. Whichever range of values is chosen, it should coincide with the range of IP-Owner and IP-Designee.
The comment about DUNS should also be added to the sections on IP-Owner and IP-Designee.
The function should be date-less-than, since Expiration-Date was defined on line 299 to be the first date for which the agreement no longer holds.
Same for line 802 and 1024.