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Subject: RE: [xacml] Groups - xacml-3.0-core-spec-errata01-wd01.doc uploaded
Comments on WD 1. Additional artifacts should say “none” The core has a scheme, but the errata does not. Related work should identify the document (in this case the core spec) which this document is an errata to. Both the title and official OASIS link should be given. Declared XML namespaces should say “none”. Same logic as for Additional artifacts. 1.2 Normative references should be a correctly formatted reference to the core spec. 1.3 Non-Normative References should say “none”. 2.1 New proposed definition: Target An element of an XACML rule, policy, or policy set which matches specified values of resource, subject, environment, action, or other custom attributes against those provided in the request context as a part of the process of determining whether the rule, policy, or policy set is applicable to the current decision. 2.2 Namespace Context for XPath Expressions I think we need to actually add the normative reference [INFOSET} to the core (via this errata). And remove some of the text from the two proposed “Add” sections. Can somebody help with this? 3 Conformance should say “this document does not add any additional conformance requirements. Need an Acknowledgements section. Do we still need changes for Multiple Category Element? Hal From: Richard Hill [mailto:Richard.C.Hill@boeing.com] Submitter's message
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