Subject: RE: [xliff-seg] Additional attributes proposal document
Hi Andrzej, Thank you very much for an excellent job on this. I have read it carefully and I have only a couple of minor comments: * "...without reference to one or more following <trans-unit> elements" - I suggest changing "following" to "surrounding". * "After careful considerations, the XLIFF Segmentation Sub-Committee has come to the conclusion that the following additions are require to the XLIFF 1.1 standard" - typo: "require" should be "required". * "All <trans-unit> elements that are encompassed by a <group> element that has its merged-translations element set to "yes" are required to have a equivalent-translation attribute set to the value of "no"." - In fact there can still be <trans-unit> elements which happen to be equivalent translations inside the <group>, so I would propose to change this to: "<trans-unit> elements that are encompassed by a <group> element that has its merged-translations element set to "yes" normally have a equivalent-translation attribute set to the value of "no"." * "... the <source element..." - missing an angular bracket. * In the inserted section 2.7, "The default value of this attribute will be "yes". The other possible value will be "no"..." - change both instances of "will be" to "is". * For sake of completeness, could you also provide suggested descriptions for the new attributes, as they should appear in section 3.3 of the specification? Cheers, Magnus -----Original Message----- From: Andrzej Zydron [mailto:email@example.com] Sent: Sunday, February 06, 2005 1:18 PM To: firstname.lastname@example.org Subject: [xliff-seg] Additional attributes proposal document Hi Everyone, Please find attached the first draft of my submission. This one deals with the additional attributes. I will complete the next part concerning the description of the method segmenting and secondary extraction of XLIFF files by the beginning of the next week. Best Regards, AZ -- email - email@example.com smail - c/o Mr. A.Zydron PO Box 2167 Gerrards Cross Bucks SL9 8XF United Kingdom Mobile +(44) 7966 477 181 FAX +(44) 1753 480 465 www - http://www.xml-intl.com This message contains confidential information and is intended only for the individual named. If you are not the named addressee you may not disseminate, distribute or copy this e-mail. Please notify the sender immediately by e-mail if you have received this e-mail by mistake and delete this e-mail from your system. E-mail transmission cannot be guaranteed to be secure or error-free as information could be intercepted, corrupted, lost, destroyed, arrive late or incomplete, or contain viruses. The sender therefore does not accept liability for any errors or omissions in the contents of this message which arise as a result of e-mail transmission. If verification is required please request a hard-copy version. Unless explicitly stated otherwise this message is provided for informational purposes only and should not be construed as a solicitation or offer.