Re: [xslt-conformance] Page

[Lofton Henderson <lofton@rockynet.com>]

Carmelo,

At 03:59 PM 10/30/01 -0500, Carmelo Montanez wrote:
> Hi All:
>  
>     I made the committe's page
> more "OASIS compliant".   Should the
> "charter" section be changed?, 
> Please comment.  

Main comment:  it is not clear how the two paragraphs of
"Charter" express our charter or mission.  A minimal
change would be to replace the 2nd paragraph with something like:

"Members of the XSLT/Xpath conformance committee, as well as the
public at large, have developed sets of conformance tests. The mission of
the OASIS XSLT/XPath conformance committee is to develop the processes,
tools and methods to integrate these disparate test-set contributions
into a comprehensive XSLT/Xpath conformance test suite."

Editorial nits on 1st pgph:  

* something like "gains" or "advances" might be
better than "waves".

* last sentence, "are increasing" should be "is
increasing"; and, the last phrase could use a verb, e.g., append
"arises." to the sentence.

> Ben and Lofton,
> is the term "expert contributor"
> ok?
>  

It's fine (very flattering!)

Thanks,
-Lofton.