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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-45?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=29224#action_29224 ] Rafael Schloming commented on AMQP-45: -------------------------------------- Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, 4th sentence: Should "outcome of the declare at the receiver." be "outcome of the declare from the receiver."? Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, last sentence: Is there a prescribed error for this condition? RS: Apparently not? RS: the term Session should be scrubbed from the amqp:illegal-state description Part 4, section 4, all 3 bullets in 1st para: Add comma after "i.e." Part 4, section 4, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: "Part 3: section 4 Delivery State of the messaging specification" - remove "Delivery State of the messaging specification" Part 4, section 4, 4th para, 1st sentence: Add comma after "i.e." Also, remove "both" Part 4, section 4.1, 2nd para: Remove parens from around "successfully" Part 4, section 4.1, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Add comma after "That is" Part 4, section 4.2, 1st para, 3rd sentence: change "non discharged" to "non-discharged" and do not italicize. Part 4, section 4.2, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Change "controller initiated" to "controller-initiated" and "resource initiated" to "resource-initiated". Also, change hyphen between "controller" and "i.e." to an em-dash and add a comma after "i.e.". RS: How do I do an em-dash? -- Use comma instead. Like this: "by the controller, i.e., the resource" Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 1st sentence: add a comma after "i.e." and a comma after the closing paren. Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 2nd sentence: "complete the sending" should be "complete sending" ? Part 4, section 4.4, 2nd sentence: transpose "therefore" and "can" Part 4, section 4.4.2, 1st sentence: Change "Here we consider" to "This section considers" Part 4, section 4.4.2, 2nd sentence: Change "see Transactional Acquisition" to "see section 4.4.3" Part 4, section 5.2, global-id, 1st sentence: "MUST be associated work with" should be "MUST be associated with". 2nd sentence: "txn-id will associated work with" should be "txn-id will be associated with" > Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review > -------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: AMQP-45 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-45 > Project: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC > Issue Type: Improvement > Reporter: Rafael Schloming > Assignee: Rafael Schloming > -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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