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Subject: RE: [amqp] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review
Not to be a nit-picker, but my last name is spelled "Huston" -Steve > -----Original Message----- > From: amqp@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:amqp@lists.oasis-open.org] On > Behalf Of OASIS Issues Tracker > Sent: Friday, January 20, 2012 4:18 PM > To: amqp@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: [amqp] [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (AMQP-45) Transactions: > Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review > > > [ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP- > 45?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment- > tabpanel&focusedCommentId=29224#action_29224 ] > > Rafael Schloming commented on AMQP-45: > -------------------------------------- > > Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, 4th sentence: Should "outcome of the declare > at > the receiver." be "outcome of the declare from the receiver."? > > Part 4, section 2, 2nd para, last sentence: Is there a prescribed error > for this > condition? > > RS: Apparently not? > RS: the term Session should be scrubbed from the amqp:illegal-state > description > > Part 4, section 4, all 3 bullets in 1st para: Add comma after "i.e." > > Part 4, section 4, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: "Part 3: section 4 Delivery > State of > the messaging specification" - remove "Delivery State of the messaging > specification" > > Part 4, section 4, 4th para, 1st sentence: Add comma after "i.e." > Also, remove "both" > > Part 4, section 4.1, 2nd para: Remove parens from around "successfully" > > Part 4, section 4.1, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Add comma after "That is" > > Part 4, section 4.2, 1st para, 3rd sentence: change "non discharged" to > "non- > discharged" and do not italicize. > > Part 4, section 4.2, 3rd para, 2nd sentence: Change "controller initiated" > to "controller-initiated" and "resource initiated" to > "resource-initiated". > Also, change hyphen between "controller" and "i.e." to an em-dash and add > a comma after "i.e.". > > RS: How do I do an em-dash? -- Use comma instead. > Like this: "by the controller, i.e., the resource" > > Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 1st sentence: add a comma after "i.e." and > a > comma after the closing paren. > > Part 4, section 4.3, 4th para, 2nd sentence: "complete the sending" should > be > "complete sending" ? > > Part 4, section 4.4, 2nd sentence: transpose "therefore" and "can" > > Part 4, section 4.4.2, 1st sentence: Change "Here we consider" to "This > section considers" > > Part 4, section 4.4.2, 2nd sentence: Change "see Transactional > Acquisition" to > "see section 4.4.3" > > Part 4, section 5.2, global-id, 1st sentence: "MUST be associated work > with" > should be "MUST be associated with". > 2nd sentence: "txn-id will associated work with" should be "txn-id will be > associated with" > > > Transactions: Incorporate feedback from Steve Houston's review > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Key: AMQP-45 > > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/AMQP-45 > > Project: OASIS Advanced Message Queuing Protocol (AMQP) TC > > Issue Type: Improvement > > Reporter: Rafael Schloming > > Assignee: Rafael Schloming > > > > > -- > This message is automatically generated by JIRA. > - > If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: > http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa > - > For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: amqp-unsubscribe@lists.oasis-open.org > For additional commands, e-mail: amqp-help@lists.oasis-open.org
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