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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] (CSAF-30) CSD01 WD01 Review comments from Beth Pumo
Stefan Hagen created CSAF-30: -------------------------------- Summary: CSD01 WD01 Review comments from Beth Pumo Key: CSAF-30 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/CSAF-30 Project: OASIS Common Security Advisory Framework (CSAF) TC Issue Type: Improvement Environment: [Proposed] Reporter: Stefan Hagen Assignee: Stefan Hagen Priority: Minor We received one TC internal comment with purely editorial content ("no technical corrections/comments") from Beth Pumo ( https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/csaf/201707/msg00003.html ) that the editor intents to implement as non-material changes revision as candidate for balloting and further progression in the OASIS standards creation process. """ Copied from mail: We have no technical corrections/comments but we do have a few minor updates: * Typo on 2.2.3.7 – “The value Produzct Name of Branch Type indicates the name of the product.” * Syntax: The plural of Product ID is “Product IDs”, not the possessive form “Product ID’s” (2.2.4.n) * Syntax: Remove the “:” from the end of 2.2.5.4 Product Tree Model – Grouped: * Semantics: The non-normative comment for [CSAF-2.215-1] should read: “The -final- two **vulnerability involvement** status states, ….” Reason: since presumably Completed and Disputed are also a final status state based on the statement that open or in-progress documents should eventually be issued as Disputed or Completed. * Syntax: The plural forms of OID and MIB are “OIDs” and “MIBs” respectively, not the possessive form “OID’s” and “MIB’s” (4.4 Document Publisher). * Formatting of indent for vuln:Notes on page 59 """ -- This message was sent by Atlassian JIRA (v6.2.2#6258)
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